Scribblegroove

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

I drew an OC from my temporary request thread. However, as everyone in there seems more focused on winning the lucky part RNG/part personal preference contest, I've decided to post this separately in its own thread here for the purposes of actual feedback. @_@

 

This does not belong to me. It belongs to the forum member Scribblegroove, the design. I am merely the artist who made it do happen.

 

Once again, the pony IS NOT A VECTOR. Only the cutie mark and the eyes are. Enjoy!

 

[Rascal~ 657]

I quite like it, I believe the mane fits a character that is someone whose a little adventure-esque. I have no clue if that is how the character is like but it looks like that. 
I think the only things I have to say are. Where's his tail? It's like it placed on his flank on the other side of him, and we even see the ass so I think that's just a layering problem. And He has a little bit of a belly, again don't know if thats just the character but I actually think its just a peeve of mine, I usually give ponies a more slimmer figure. 

But pretty awesome anyways, I love it!

[Arylett Charnoa 4,919]

I quite like it, I believe the mane fits a character that is someone whose a little adventure-esque. I have no clue if that is how the character is like but it looks like that. 

I think the only things I have to say are. Where's his tail? It's like it placed on his flank on the other side of him, and we even see the ass so I think that's just a layering problem. And He has a little bit of a belly, again don't know if thats just the character but I actually think its just a peeve of mine, I usually give ponies a more slimmer figure. 

But pretty awesome anyways, I love it!

Yeah, the mane is intentional. I followed instructions from the creator himself. :3

 

As for the tail, that was me trying to take a short cut that I didn't believe would be too noticeable. It isn't for the most part, as it would take a longer time to fix the issue. Probably because of the angle I chose to draw his ass from. As the drawing has been proliferated everywhere, I won't be fixing it this time. But I'll keep that in mind for the future. Thank you. :3

 

As for the belly, that is actually skinnier than show-accurate ponies typically are. Especially in proportion to his very long legs. (Intentional as well.) If I made him any skinnier, he might look anorexic. O_O I know, I messed around with that stomach a few times.

 

But thank you for your comment and criticism. :3