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Finesthour

Finesthour 7,284

The wonderful fuzzy feeling that you feel in the pit of your stomach.


You may deny it, but everyone wants to feel the power of love.


Everyone wants to feel loved, to feel accepted.


Some thrive for it, other die for it.


But in the end, love is a dark, depressing thing.


It kills the weak, and weakens the strong.


It causes your heart to do things you would of never thought possible.


It turns happy children into depressed adults.


But love is also amazing as well.


It turns the weak into strong, and the strong into lovers.


It causes passion, and you thrive for the well being of others.


The difference between friendly love and romantic love goes together on a fine line.


Friendly love is where a friend say's they love you, and try to help you out of hard times.


Romantic love is the greatest feeling anyone can feel.


You begin to live for the person, and you do anything for them.


You believe that there is nothing that can separate you.


And then, when you least expect it, it is torn away from you.


You feel as if there is nothing left in the world, no excuse to live.


I am here to tell you there is a way out.


Continue to live your life.


They saying "there is someone for everyone" is false.


To find someone that is for you, you must work for it.


It will not just fall on your lap.


No matter how sad you become, keep fighting for your right to love.


The person out there is somewhere, just waiting for you.


Never give up my friends.


The hear is feeble and weak.


It is up to you to decide how much it can take.


My heart may of been torn to pieces, but I choose to continue fighting.


I may have been destroyed in the deceptive game of love more times than I am alive,


But I choose to continue fighting.


No matter how much your heart is smashed into the ground,


no matter how bad you may feel.


There is always more to live for.


You will eventually find that tiny shred of love that will complete your life.


I am still searching for my piece.


I will always continue to fight until my last breath.


I will find my true love.


I will become happy.


I will become the person I was meant to be.


The person that will make someone else's life the happiest they can be.


My goal is very simple, to make someone else happy.


So their hearts are never destroyed like mine.


In that twisted, evil game of love.

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TomokoKuroki

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Here I am, I give my heart

 

The only thing you tore apart

 

But no matter what they say, this isn't the end

 

Because tomorrow is a brand new start

 

I dunno, random poem I made that I thought fit well in this thread. :)

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Sweet poem dude! I could never write anything that good, always sukd at poetry myself, but everyone has their own hidden talent. :) Weird that you should mention that you write better when you’re depressed. I seem to feel the same way, if Im feeling down it seems like its easier to express my feelings more clearly.
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TomokoKuroki

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Oh thank ye'.

 

You should see me when I am depressed.

 

I write 20% better.

 

Depending on what you write, the more of a feeling you have about you are writing, the better it will always come out.

Feelings add passion to art.

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Sweet poem dude! I could never write anything that good, always sukd at poetry myself, but everyone has their own hidden talent. :) Weird that you should mention that you write better when you’re depressed. I seem to feel the same way, if Im feeling down it seems like its easier to express my feelings more clearly.

 

Yeah, it is rather weird.

 

I would not consider myself good at writing poems, I just love to get my feelings out xD

You write good poems and good fanfics, :o Keep it up! i like it!

 

Why thank you c:

so cute to read :) ~

 

Heh, but not cute to feel.

Don't know if it's been said before, but you got a great future as a writer.

 

And damn, This is one big poem. o.O

 

Hmm, never seen myself as a great author.

Thanks for the compliment :P

It is beautiful creations such as these,

Things my heart finds to be a tease,

That I'm taking the nigh-forgotten

Artistic pathway of the uncommon.

Together against haters we stand tall

And follow the best path of them all.

 

Thank you for the kind wards feather c:

Depending on what you write, the more of a feeling you have about you are writing, the better it will always come out.

Feelings add passion to art.

 

Hmm, I guess so.
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Heh, but not cute to feel.

 

 

It's inpsiring though, like you realize you've been hurt but you won't let it stop you, you WILL go on, "

 

I will find my true love.

 

I will become happy.

 

I will become the person I was meant to be.

 

The person that will make someone else's life the happiest they can be." ~ very inspiring and cute that you want to make someone happy like that :)

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It's inpsiring though, like you realize you've been hurt but you won't let it stop you, you WILL go on, "

 

I will find my true love.

 

I will become happy.

 

I will become the person I was meant to be.

 

The person that will make someone else's life the happiest they can be." ~ very inspiring and cute that you want to make someone happy like that :)

 

 

Lol, I wrote that?

 

I completly forgot I put those lines in xD

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The wonderful fuzzy feeling that you feel in the pit of your stomach.

You may deny it, but everyone wants to feel the power of love.

Everyone wants to feel loved, to feel accepted.

Some thrive for it, other die for it.

But in the end, love is a dark, depressing thing.

It kills the weak, and weakens the strong.

It causes your heart to do things you would of never thought possible.

It turns happy children into depressed adults.

But love is also amazing as well.

It turns the weak into strong, and the strong into lovers.

It causes passion, and you thrive for the well being of others.

The difference between friendly love and romantic love goes together on a fine line.

Friendly love is where a friend say's they love you, and try to help you out of hard times.

Romantic love is the greatest feeling anyone can feel.

You begin to live for the person, and you do anything for them.

You believe that there is nothing that can separate you.

And then, when you least expect it, it is torn away from you.

You feel as if there is nothing left in the world, no excuse to live.

I am here to tell you there is a way out.

Continue to live your life.

They saying "there is someone for everyone" is false.

To find someone that is for you, you must work for it.

It will not just fall on your lap.

No matter how sad you become, keep fighting for your right to love.

The person out there is somewhere, just waiting for you.

Never give up my friends.

The hear is feeble and weak.

It is up to you to decide how much it can take.

My heart may of been torn to pieces, but I choose to continue fighting.

I may have been destroyed in the deceptive game of love more times than I am alive,

But I choose to continue fighting.

No matter how much your heart is smashed into the ground,

no matter how bad you may feel.

There is always more to live for.

You will eventually find that tiny shred of love that will complete your life.

I am still searching for my piece.

I will always continue to fight until my last breath.

I will find my true love.

I will become happy.

I will become the person I was meant to be.

The person that will make someone else's life the happiest they can be.

My goal is very simple, to make someone else happy.

So their hearts are never destroyed like mine.

In that twisted, evil game of love.

you're a good guy. we've talked about things like this, haven't we?

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