Smile, if only for me...

[The Temporal Twins 89]

I came up with this piece when i saw this piece named, "Never Stop Smiling"



The piece inspired me to write this poem as a dialog for Rainbow Dash

I cried a little while writing this,
but my tears couldn't smudge the sharp edge of this poem, cutting into my heart...
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Special thanks to Sharktino and everyone else on DeviantArt who had a hand in making this amazing piece
The image, along with the credits to all who where involved in it's creation, can be found HERE.
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Through the good, and the bad
you were always happy, never sad

Through each day, you would smile and laugh
brightening the life, of all in your path

But when you died, and the world grew cold
I heard you whisper, from Death's dark hold

"Just keep smiling, if only for me"
"If nothing else, cause then you'll see"

"The world around you, is always in need"
"but give it a smile, and it will be freed"

"Freed from the chains, that bind it down"
"Freed from the hate, that makes us all frown"

"Freed from the sorrow, that darkens your day"
"so that our friendship, can wash it away"

"Even if, you feel down"
"and the world, makes you frown"

"I'll be here, right with you"
"to make your smile, shine like new"

That's what I heard, and it rang in my head
as i raced to your house, to find you dead

As I sat there, crying in pain
Some of my tears, fell on your mane

And as they touched, what did I see
I saw you get up, and smile at me

You told me to smile, if only for you
And the reason why, I already knew

The world around me, was in need
But i gave it a smile, and it was freed

Freed from the chains, that bound it down
and all the things, that made us frown

Freed from the sorrow, that darkened my day
So now our friendship, can wash it away

Even now, as you fade away
I still know, that you'll stay

I may not hear you, touch you or see
But i know, your right next to me

And from today, till the day I die
You'll always be here, my Pinky Pie...

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Note to all;

I have the rights to post this image on here.
If you wish to use it you MUST get permission from ~Sharktino
Otherwise you could get into trouble for Copyright infringement

Edited November 4, 2012 by The Temporal Twins

[Rainbow Skywalker 642]

If there were ever one poem in the history of my life

through all my pain and my suffering and strife

For not one of these moments did I cry

Until your poem, hath caught my eye

It made my soul, cry from the inside out

The saddest poem I have heard, without a doubt.

And the picture was truly worth a thousands words.

And with it i hear the songs of a thousand songbirds,

They tell me to be happy, just like you say

But since seeing that picture, my happiness hath gone away.

A fitting work for such a picture

It would make Pinkie proud, I am sure.

[Pinkie D Pie 1,036]

That is a very nice poem. Sad indeed. But I loved that poem, and it actually made my eyes water a little bit. Oh you have talent in writing poems, that is for sure.

[The Temporal Twins 89]

That is a very nice poem. Sad indeed. But I loved that poem, and it actually made my eyes water a little bit. Oh you have talent in writing poems, that is for sure.

 

strangely enough,

That was the 4th poem I've ever written,

on top of that, I HATE writing, with a passion.

 

I guess life's funny like that...

 

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Any and all feedback is appreciated...

 

Feel free to leave your comments and concerns for all my work!!!

I love feed back because I can't get better if I don't know what is wrong in the first place...

[Dowlphin 463]

Sorry that I can't give constructive feedback on your poem writing, for reasons you might understand well. The effect it has speaks for its quality.

 

I found typos though... haha.

[Almar ZeWizard 60]

This is really good It made me tear up a little bit not many things can do that to me the only things that made to do this was maybe the start of UP and Bambi. 

[The Temporal Twins 89]

Sorry that I can't give constructive feedback on your poem writing, for reasons you might understand well. The effect it has speaks for its quality.

 

I found typos though... haha.

Yea, I haven't really been too keen on updating these.

I've actually left the forum for the most part behind and am mainly on DeviantArt now, though I do check for new replies on here periodically.....

 

If you want to see any of my newer works, feel free to check out my DA gallery