Thoughts on my new drawing?

[RainbowDashie RD 19]

Okay guys, I made a new drawing of my fav, Rainbow Dash! It isn't great and I couldn't scan it in, but I thought I would show you guys it anyway! The tail is messed up I know, and her eyes, but oh well! I do take requests, working on some right now! Give me your opinion guys!! ~Dashie

 

Here it is:

Her head got cut out partially sorry about that! I will post a new one later if you all want! It wont make that much of a difference, though!

[Winona the Dog 1,981]

It looks great. The anatomy is great and both the posture and facial expression is well done.

 

One thing you can improve on is the tail as the coloring of it is missing it's colors in some areas. For an example I can see some blue where the red should be. 

[Frosty V 309]

That's awesome! All of the proportions and colors are all perfect. Its a 9/10 for me. Though it would be cool if you drew tank in the background with the deal it glasses, just a thought for your next drawing, but rhis ones really cool. Great job bronopolis.

Edited August 4, 2013 by Frosty V

[Swick (ded) 436]

That's kinda weird, I literally just drew this picture yesterday. XP Nice job, but it looks a little messy. Marker(or whatever you used) isn't the best for drawing, IMO.