How much time we have?
I admit that I'm not much of a forums person.
I admit Tempest Shadow is my new waifu.
I admit I only have one friend.
I admit I suffer from depression but tried to bottle it up and hide it cause I wanted to join the military.
The first major update the forum has had in years happened : D Might be a little difficult to get used to at first, but it's not as complicated as it looks, plus it's still being worked on, so things might become a little more user-friendly and better in time
When you make your next one you could just right down the dialogue on a different sheet of paper too see if its done correctly or you right in pencil then if looks correct trace over it in black.
You did a really good job on the comic over all.