Colt

I would love to give you some feedback... WITH A COST, that is please leave feedback on my OC dragon if you are able too it will be highly apreciated. OC's - Colt Strahl Ocelot Review Da looks I have to say I really liked his pony creator design, ears and hoodie look good with his color scheme and his rocker kind of mane goes well with his cuttie mark. His profile picture in paper also looks good his attitude its wild and fits with his “feline” attributes I would like to know why if you described him as mainly calm this pose is for his profile but over all I consider his colors as well balanced, fitting to the character and also executed very nicely. Da character Here and before I start I have to say that Im normal a jerkin terms of cannon and extending it, what its going to be said its not a critique or encourage you to change your OC. Ok after that. His feline attributes and “heritage” kind of make me walk away from the character, we are unable to know if “hybrids” are posible in the world of ponies, many would say that manticores, minotaurs or griffons are that, IMO they are born from such kind of races and blood lines and are not a produce of interspecies breeding. His motivation also seems off to me he just decided to go on a journey just like that? And did he learned the martial arts before or after this travel/adventure. You go forward and backward explaining his story, skills, job, achievements and hobbies in the same text and (maybe because its my fault) I didnt get the concept of the journey or the places he visited or if he is still on that part of his life. Also I understand this, as my own OC, is an “adventure / battle” type of character. And I see all you want to do with him, but what I would recommend you to do is to find “weakness” or “opportunities” for him to grow. Ocelot is an outstanding fighter but after all its an “outsider” to the world beyond Everfree what are the implications to that, how does he adapt to being an orphan or any other implications there could be for somepony like him. Give him a chance to grow with your RP's and your advenrues. Well those are my thoughts

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Echoes of impacts and shouts reached his ears, echoing with no end they had no place in this barren and forsaken place. With his sight blocked by dark gray smoke Colt was unable to see his surroundings, his back paws that felt heavy and tiered placed over a dry death soil that was also gray as the clouds of smoke around. In his confusion and with no other idea hin his mind the snout of the dragon opened up to call for somepony but his voice never came out. The feeling of the mute sound was right at the end of his throat, the air flowing from his insides was also there but no sound was emitted. With the desperation growing Colt tried with no results to yell until he felt the cold pain of his sore throat it was no use there was no voice in him, In that moment the desolated place broke down, the smoke was absorbed by the death soil and the horizon began to sunk into a void of darkness. Wide fissures ran from the end of his sight to the place he was standing consuming in a landslide all the land he could see, it all crumbled until there was nothing more in front of him. That place was no more than a ravine standing over a sea of that visions dark smoke. The floor once again shook and the dragon knew what was coming, the ravine he was standing on began to crumble and with it the figure of the dragon fell into the darkness. Colt did nothing, his legs wont move, his wings wont flap, he was just able to turn his eyes to the place he was falling from to see her, Iron Wing, watching him as he fell down trying to reach him with her hooves, but it was to late, the dragon was falling into the abyss, despairing, falling. "Im Faling" he thought as his eyes opened wide "it was all a dream and now you are awake", the body from Colt slide from the back of the Alicorn princess as some thumps filled the pitch black room with its sound. There were mere moments before his body found its destiny and knowing it the dragon tried to react placing his left arm to save him from the fall. Too late and too week, the pain of the scorched arm by the lighting was an instant reminder of his peccary condition and the following crash on the land a more than vivid evidence of his last battle. Colt felt like his back was being broken into pieces as his chin impacted the ground flowed by the limp scaled body. Moments filled with the pain of his back and arm followed while he realized he was sunk in darkness "The pain must mean Im still alive" the thought as he tried to sustain the suffering. The only lights at his eyes were the infinite stars covering Luna's mane, he was unable to see more, he listened to the fall of something unable to know that was Ice going down the stairs. "At least I am awake" he said trying to recompose himself.

This sounds fun and feedback is a great way to improve and find mistakes so here they are. Both of them are meant an design for an adventure FIC OC's - Colt Strahl | Earth Miracle | Here you have access to all their artwork

Colt felt the discomfort that started do fill the royal alicorn. "Great idiot you achieved to hit her in a bad spot in only two questions and less than ten minutes.... be proud" the mind of the dragon scolded. He was aware of how difficult it was for her to find a place back in her world, for Faust he knew it and bringing a bad moment to her was the last thing he wanted for the mare with both horn and wings. Sadly the dragon voice muted he didn't wanted to make this worse thankfully for him the pegasus in armor came to the rescue. "Yes that's right we will be flying soon" The dragon stood up while saying this words in a shaky way "Excuse me Iron, Luna I'll make sure Emi is ready to depart." he said with a little blush and unable to see the alicorn in the eye. Walking away from the table he called for the alabaster pegasus. "Hey we are leaving in short sis, get ready" he said approaching to the table that also hosted Electro, watching the young colt there remind him of something. "Looks like you will be flying with me Electro, or maybe I will be taking Daylight with me... wait we are flying there right" he said having now some doubts about his idea of reaching there. The dragon turned arround and asked the mind behind all the event "Hey Iron we are flying to your parents house right?" The mare made some nods getting not the picture of the pegasus into her mind. "Well he totally looks like one of those speed daredevils" she made a remark just before having the last taste of her ice cream after that Emi kept on. "Colt wrote me about him being super serious on breaking some speed record or something" he said while playing with the spoon and moving her hooves in silly ways. "Oh such a gentlecolt the pleasure was all mine, it feels good to finally talk to you guys instead of reading about you... and I guess its also funny" she remarked with a little giggle, before being questioned about one of her favorite topics; Ice-cream "Oh I just LOVE ice-cream" she said with a little to much of enthusiasm "And this was particularly GOOD, im not sure about the flavor Im not used to such a careful craft but believe me when I tell you I will find out, I have to try this again and maybe ALL of the flavors Ms Ice Storm has in here " as she talked Emi moved her hooves and flapped her wings as a young filly in a amusement park, bad for her that time didn't last long, the voice of Iron wing kind of killed her Ice-cream mood rush and his brother flowing "HER commands" didn't helped much. "Mph" Emi hummed her disapproving response to hes brother, she knew he was trying to win her good side, oh did she knew it but this time an ice-cream was not enough to earn. "You weren't particularly kind to Luna didnt you?" she said to her brother with a low voice, she didnt wanted for the rest to hear. "You better stop being a fool soon or you are going to turn this just as the last one" it was not a threat or a warning she talked serious her brother needed to end his stupidity soon. "Well Electro we will have all a day to talk and have fun lets not spoil it" were the words that showed a complete change in her attitude while walking in the direction of the linx. Opening her saddlebag with a wing and making a friendly wink to her feline friend the mare made an invitation "Come on Duran I bet you want a nice comfortable ride back home" flying or trotting made no difference she knew the lazy cat would liked a place to enjoy the trip instead of walking it. "I need to rant a little about my stupid brother...care to share your mind?" she told the lynx into his mind

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Green Grass and High tides. A tribute to the passed away musicians that are waiting in a Valhala of music, I think the idea its amazing and its very well executed

A shiver... no it was more than that, a fresh weird sensation ran through his back as his consciousness tried to recompose itself into reality. A constant sway was the first thing that he was able to recognize, he was moving not by his own his limbs were cold... weak then how? how was that possible?. Then the warmth beneath his chest was what followed, it was a warm soft feel that remembered the dragon those past times when he felt the same movement, the same trot, the same warmth at the back of his loving guardian... "Mother?..." he whispered with almost a fating voice. There was one particular difference though that refreshing and alleviating touch at his back, like if a breeze nested over his scales. It was weird, yet comforting that feeling covered him was enough to fight the weight on his eyes making them to open to find a sight that had no explanation in his mind. Stars sparkled all around Colt’s sight, a dark beautiful sky was all he could saw. The scent of a perfect summer night invaded him, what was this, was he, gone?, was he on the other side?. The feeling from this night kept him away from fear or worries, he was dazzled by all the sparks at his eyes. Slowly the dragon felled down again into his slumber he was never able to understand how he was carried by the princess of the moon itself.

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The mare shook her head turning back to her happy self while attempting to say "No no" to Electro. "O there is no need to worry Electrobolt, after all there is no possible way remembering my parents could bring a bad memory, its just that I miss them some time, we both do" she said looking to the direction of her brother talking to Luna and THAT other mare. "At least I was able to say good bye" she said in a whisper at the middle of a sigh that was almost imperceptible. By that moment the door was knocked and THAT other mare kindly offered to open it... to kindly in Emi's eyes. At the entrance a pegasus entered the shop followed by, "O wow is that Twilight Sparkle?" she was kind of surprised as a Canterlot college girl finding celebrities such as a princess and a element of harmony was WAY above her average day. But also this pegasus he was into the description in Colt's letters, also she quickly did a sweep of the ponies in the house "Ok THAT guardian is here, also Ice, the detective Unicorn, Electrobolt too... he has to be the one that is missing". By the moment she was reaching her conclusion Electro spoke again to her "Oh, I dont want you to think im a gossip girl or something like that Im sure I will be able to know lots of you and the others during the day, and that makes me want to ask, Is that Alex over there? you know the pegasus from Team B? if he is i think we are departing soon" she asked wanting to know if finally the heroic team was together. Colt listened to all the activities and the preferences of the princess of the night, it was nice to realize this royal governor was into the same things normal pony liked. Yes some of her hobies could be considered boring or "up tight" by some youngsters but the dragon found it very matching to his own hobbies. Luna finished telling them even a little about her musical preferences and then Colt's mouth went free asking the same question that was fluttering in his mind "And do you like how the world is now?" for a second the mind of the dragon froze "Did i said that or just think of it" he didn't knew if the query that his mouth spilled was out of place or could be he wanted to know though he just wished for Luna not to be angry. The shock in Colt was so great he didnt noticed Iron going to attend the door and just recovered from it as he saw Alex and the Pontville librarian entering the room, Colt had the chance to talk with the lilac mare before and he was happy to see her here. Also he knew soon would be time to start their trip to Iron's parents house.