Cider Contest 4.0: Haiku Challenge

[Longhaul 6,838]

"Cutie marks are lame!"
Starlight declares, slamming down
yet another drink.

Starlight Glimmer: 4

 

Edited August 5, 2018 by Longhaul

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,088]

World is vast and wide.
So much out there to explore.
Right now, drink cider.

 

Aj=5

[The Kaeya Simp 13,988]

Much more cider has
By Twilight, yeah
This is a haiku

Twi=4

[ChB 18,550]

3 hours ago, Longhaul said:

"Cutie marks are lame!"
Starlight declares, slamming down
yet another cider.

Starlight Glimmer: 4

 

Sorry. The third line has six syllables. Starlight is still at 3.

 

5 minutes ago, Sherbert Music-Guard said:

Much more cider has
By Twilight, yeah
This is a haiku

Twi=4

No. A Haiku has 5-7-5 syllables. Yours has 5-4-5 syllables.

Twilight is still at 3.

[Lights Action 476]

Rainbow Dash jumps in
Enthusiasm is key
Just for me this time!
RAINBOW DASH= 1
 

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,088]

Full glass of cider. 
Must down it all in one go.
Sorry was that yours. 

 

Aj=6

Edited August 5, 2018 by Dawnchaser

[Sunny Fox 5,950]

Rarity is best,
You feel so much happier
When you accept this.

Rarity: 3

[ChB 18,550]

2 minutes ago, Dawnchaser said:

Full glass of cider. 
Must attack at once. 
Sorry was that yours. 

 

Aj=6

Sorry. The second line has only 5 syllables, when it should be 7.

AJ is still at 5.

[The Kaeya Simp 13,988]

Twilight is drinking
She is clearly the best
Accept this, all you!

Twi = 4

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,088]

6 minutes ago, ChB said:

Sorry. The second line has only 5 syllables, when it should be 7.

AJ is still at 5.

Fixed

 

Company coming?
And your house is a big mess?
Drink lots of cider.

 

Aj=7

[Longhaul 6,838]

 

22 minutes ago, ChB said:

Sorry. The third line has six syllables. Starlight is still at 3.

 

Fixed.

Starlight will not be
shown up by an earth pony
so she drinks some more.

Starlight Glimmer: 5

 

 

[ChB 18,550]

14 minutes ago, Sherbert Music-Guard said:

Twilight is drinking
She is clearly the best
Accept this, all you!

Twi = 4

I suppose you read "clearly" as three syllables, when it's only two. ("Clea-r-ly"?) I'll let this slide for now, but next time, please make sure your second line has 7 syllables.

 

To everypony, if you are unsure how many syllables are in your line, please use this:

https://syllablecounter.net/ 

[Sunny Fox 5,950]

Do I fight alone?
Rarity fans should abound.
So be it. Onward!

Rarity: 4

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,088]

Star thinks she's big.
With her fancy little words.
This is not so hard. 

 

Aj=8

Edited August 5, 2018 by Dawnchaser

[The Kaeya Simp 13,988]

Twilight gulps down her

fifth cider, clearly y'all

need to give up now!

[Cash In 22,230]

I haven't done a haiku in over 2 years, but it's a worth an attempt.

Come on Fluttershy.

Do it for the animals.

Chug like you mean it

 

Fluttershy 1 - Hopefully.

[Sunny Fox 5,950]

Ask Rarity's club,
Fight ends in a hot minute,
So I don't do that.

Rarity: 5

[Dawnchaser 🌄 8,088]

I sat on a pin.
It did not give me a grin.
Best drink more cider. 

Aj=9

[The Kaeya Simp 13,988]

Twilight needs much more
cider to be able to
win against others!

Twilight=6

[Sunny Fox 5,950]

If you post, I post.
Otherwise I wait a bit.
More for Rarity!

Rarity: 6

[Longhaul 6,838]

Not to be deterred,
Starlight grabs another and
chugs it right on down.

Starlight Glimmer: 6

 

[The Kaeya Simp 13,988]

Twilight Races ahead
To second place, all you lot
Seven ciders down

[Longhaul 6,838]

Sneering heavily,
Starlight slams down one more drink
to tie with Twilight.

Starlight Glimmer: 7

 

[Lord Valtasar 12,690]

Trix wants a duel
to exile twilight out
she will show them all

Trixie:8

Edited August 5, 2018 by Lord Valtasar

[The Kaeya Simp 13,988]

Twilight chugs down more
cider, give up all of you
the eighth cider gone