Steampunk Rainbow Dash

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

Hey everypony

I've been working on a Steampunk version of Rainbow Dash, I think I'm finished but it doesn't look right any suggestions on how I can change it? Go easy on me, it's my first proper MLP art work XD

[Pizzly 57]

um make her a pony no kidding this is really good i love steam punk stuff

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

  On 2011-12-20 at 6:46 PM, 'Yarin' said:

um make her a pony no kidding this is really good i love steam punk stuff

 

Thanks XD but were you joking about making her a pony now? XD

[Pizzly 57]

maybe i bet it would look fine either way

[pondus30 152]

Looks good!

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

  On 2011-12-20 at 7:16 PM, 'pondus30' said:

Looks good!

 

Thanks but any recommendations on anything I must change?

[pondus30 152]

  On 2011-12-20 at 7:27 PM, 'Sudnifisent' said:

Thanks but any recommendations on anything I must change?

 

Not that i can see

[Finesthour 7,289]

I think I may like this picture a little too much...

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

  On 2011-12-20 at 8:04 PM, 'PinkiePie' said:

I think I may like this picture a little too much...

 

Really? I'm so happy~~~

do you have any recommendations on anything I must change?

[Finesthour 7,289]

Well if you want me to nitpick...

 

Her chin looks like a mans.

 

Make it a little more rounded.

 

I believe Rainbow has blue eyes.

 

The rainbow order is off I believe.

 

But tat is just nitpicking

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

  On 2011-12-20 at 8:22 PM, 'PinkiePie' said:

Well if you want me to nitpick...

 

Her chin looks like a mans.

 

Make it a little more rounded.

 

I believe Rainbow has blue eyes.

 

The rainbow order is off I believe.

 

But tat is just nitpicking

 

i thought it looked quite masculine when I was drawing it XD and here's a reference picture:

[Finesthour 7,289]

Ah, I mis-read the orange as yellow.

 

My mistake.

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

  On 2011-12-20 at 8:34 PM, 'PinkiePie' said:

Ah, I mis-read the orange as yellow.

 

My mistake.

 

Haha that's alright XD. I'll work on the jaw, where must I round it?

[D1SC0RD 987]

It looks great

 

Again, the chin could use a touch-up, and perhaps her left pit as well.

 

Other than that, it's fantastic (:

[Finesthour 7,289]

 

The chin looks very manly.

 

Try to round out the cheeks a little more.

[Nah 3,182]

:notbad:

[I used to be a stranger 7,994]

Methinks you need to have some practice on Life drawing, Sudnifisent. Weight and volume need improvement, although composition and colour selection are spot on.

[Doctor XFizzle 8,670]

Looks pretty darn great to me, leagues above what I could ever draw/color

[Inkfeather 597]

That is one pointy chin right there. Oh well, nice job anyway mate!

[FLARE 952]

keep up the good work I look forward to seeing some more art from you in the future.

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

  On 2011-12-20 at 8:49 PM, 'Blue' said:

Methinks you need to have some practice on Life drawing, Sudnifisent. Weight and volume need improvement, although composition and colour selection are spot on.

 

Heh-heh ^^' I don't usually draw this style XD I usually draw anime style which is a lot more basic XD but thanks.

  On 2011-12-20 at 8:53 PM, 'Lamii' said:

That is one pointy chin right there. Oh well, nice job anyway mate!

 

haha, I guess I REALLY need to work on the chin

  On 2011-12-20 at 8:56 PM, 'Flare' said:

keep up the good work I look forward to seeing some more art from you in the future.

 

Thanks I have a deviantart account if you want to see more but this is my first proper MLP piece the rest is anime and stuff.

  On 2011-12-20 at 8:52 PM, 'Doctor XFizzle' said:

Looks pretty darn great to me, leagues above what I could ever draw/color

 

Thank you very much

 

  On 2011-12-20 at 8:42 PM, 'D1SC0RD' said:

It looks great

 

Again, the chin could use a touch-up, and perhaps her left pit as well.

 

Other than that, it's fantastic (:

 

Thanks but what must I do to her pit?

[D1SC0RD 987]

It seems a little low, to me. Maybe raise it? s:

 

It just doesn't look proper to me.

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

  On 2011-12-20 at 9:36 PM, 'D1SC0RD' said:

It seems a little low, to me. Maybe raise it? s:

 

It just doesn't look proper to me.

 

Holy crap! how did I miss tha!? thanks for pointing it out XD

[D1SC0RD 987]

Anytime

[Finesthour 7,289]

I am making this my background.

 

I don't change my background often.

 

You win.