I need help for a cutiemark and name for OC

[Slice0Pie 815]

Hello

I have a new OC, but I have no idea for a name, OR cutiemark for her.

She is my new main OC instead of Shining snow, to.

So, here is a pic.

I am currently working on a background for her, but for now, let me explain what I got for now.

She is 18 years old, she is a pegasus, she lives in Clouds dale, she has only one friend, but she can be very mean, she is bullied, and she is sweet, calm, unpaitcent, and at moments, can be very annoying, and rude.

Her favorite foods are daffidel sandwiches, and she usually trusts ponies, but then again, its hard for her to trust.

So.. ya, think anyone can help  Thanks!

[Sugar Pea 2,682]

You don't mind some critique, do you?

First off, I think you should try having that secondary color on your OC, instead of just faded into the mane, try having the color stripe down one side of it (both tail and mane). Frankly, I don't think it looks right when I see OCs with faded colors in their hair...

Secondly, it seems her traits are kinda confusing....you say she is mean and annoying, but then again saying that she's bullied makes her seem cowardice. It just seems like a list of all those kinda makes her seem a bit two faced, I mean tis okay to have their moments where they want to be nice or extremely rude, but making all those part of her personality at once can lead to confusing her character. Try choosing one of the two. :3

Anywho, I think you should have her cutiemark be tornadoes! She just had that dusty looks twisters have...(I know it's one of the many common cutie marks in the show, but trust me on this). 

I would say her name should be....hmmmm......Dusty Twist. 

 

 

Edited October 11, 2013 by weirdokitterz

[Slice0Pie 815]

You don't mind some critique, do you?

First off, I think you should try having that secondary color on your OC, instead of just faded into the mane, try having the color stripe down one side of it (both tail and mane). Frankly, I don't think it looks right when I see OCs with faded colors in their hair...

Secondly, it seems her traits are kinda confusing....you say she is mean and annoying, but then again saying that she's bullied makes her seem cowardice. It just seems like a list of all those kinda makes her seem a bit two faced, I mean tis okay to have their moments where they want to be nice or extremely rude, but making all those part of her personality at once can lead to confusing her character. Try choosing one of the two. :3

Anywho, I think you should have her cutiemark be tornadoes! She just had that dusty looks twisters have...(I know it's one of the many common cutie marks in the show, but trust me on this). 

I would say her name should be....hmmmm......Dusty Twist. 

 

Hmm true ok lol I'll change the mane

And I'll just make her nice, calm, and a little annoying anyways thanks for the critique, and for some choices! ^^

[Outkin 35]

Calm storm...something along those lines, just taking that "calm before the storm", and applying it to her, since she's normally quiet/calm, but this only hides the coming storm of annoying and rude actions that will result if you provoke her.

Edited October 11, 2013 by Outkin