Casual Stroll - An Introductionary RP mainly around Equestria OOC [Open Entry For All]

[Blitz Boom 4,621]

@MiragetheChangeling

Better, but suggestion? Only have words said by the characters be color, and use different color for different characters. It helps differentiate, like I do in my posts. More structured and viewable, you know? Mixing color in all of a sudden from when the first starts to write isn't optimal. Here, let me try and show you what I mean. This would be your post with what I mentioned:

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*a youngish female Changeling is in a protective stance in front of a young Changeling princess, the hissing sound is coming from the one in the protective stance*

"Look here you shi* head. You had better leave Amanita alone or I will tear you to shreds."

*she seems ready to do so as well, in front of them appears to be a Timberwolf, somewhat smaller than others of its age* *the Changeling resumed her hissing from before* “I swear if it hurts Amanita I will kill it until it can’t reform again.” *the Changeling mare seemed to be interested only in protecting the mare behind her* *this mare has the normal black body of the old form of Changelings, but with a slight purple tint, her mane thingy and her tail look grey, her bug-like wings a transparent purple, and her eyes a dark purple*

"M-Mirage? W-what’s going on? W-where’d you go?"

*this mare’s panick filled eyes also seemed to be faded/clouded over* "oh no... I hear something else approaching! What if it’s another one of those creatures!?" *the young mare seemed to be frightened not only by the Timberwolf in front of them, but she was also swinging her head around and flicking her ears to and fro nervously* *this mare’s wings also have the transparent purple to them, but her coat/exoskeleton has more of the purple tint to it, her mane and tail are a lighter purple, and her eyes are a faded/clouded over eyes are purple*

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The part in cursive can be considered internal dialogue, so I see no point in sectioning that for your particular style. Do you se what I mean however? Somewhat more readable, yes?

I have a question abut your style though. Not a critique currently, I just haven't seen this style before. The way you put small tidbits in things, is it because you normall participate in active RP? You know, the sort that goes ion between two people on the spot, rather than with breaks in between? I'm curious.

And as the others say, I normally only reply every 2 days. Sometimes I do an extra one if there's not too many, but as a day like today for example, I have been writing basically since I got home from work since the words got stuck in my head, and as such, my whole day have been spent with it. I need to have some time for games and, you know... Netflix. Some important things too, but still, goofing around time is important as well to not burn out.

Remember though, that if it is, you can see if others are willing to jam with you as well. You still have the pegasus in Ponyville as a workable character. Could be used if you find an RP partner who is around a lot. ^^

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@Dji

Charlie is an Everfree Spirit. Essentially the spirit of a magical tree in the forest (there's a bundle of them deep in the woods in his canon) and when they get harvested the spirit is released and put into the dream world as a kind of dream spirit. Their purpose is best explained by Seamore himself, but that is the gist of it.

Charlie is stuck to a part of his body, namely the stick,a nd his projection is basically however he wished to look like. He is also one who have made a deal with a demon (Vivid Loss) to get him a new body, and as such were placed in the castle by her, before Serenade, Ziggy, etc. etc. fell over him and brought him along. Something which is not ideal for Vivid, as she now will have to find him once she have regained enough power to start the ritual to bind him to a living body.

...No, this is not like a possession. It's an empty vessel. Completely non-evil... Long as you don't ask where the parts cam from.

[Amanita 6,826]

@Blitz Boom

yeah that seems a lot better, thank you! And yes I do normally participate in active role plays, I mean I do Group Roleplays to but it’s normally not a whole lot of people, normally 3 or 4 people at a time

Edited December 4, 2017 by MiragetheChangeling

[Blitz Boom 4,621]

@MiragetheChangeling

That explains the time ans the impatience. Sorry to say that this one might be one of the slower, unless you pair off with somepony else than myself. I frankly encourags it, so if anypony feels like jamming with you, that would be grand. ^^ Plus it would get the post number up on the thread, so we can be closer to overtake The Trotting Dead as the most popular RP in the Everfree Forest section, hehe.

[Amanita 6,826]

@Blitz Boom

yeah, and plus I’m not a very patient person in real life either

WAIT! YOU MEAN THIS ISNT REAL!? MY WHOLE LIFE HAS BEEN A LIE!!!!

-_-’ my ADHD probably has something to do with that

[Blitz Boom 4,621]

@Dji

Whoops, almost missed you and Watts.

I have some vague memories about Watts now that I see the Bio, and I see no issue whatsoever with having her renter the RP. I would offer Blitz and Molotov, but seeing as we have a new one who likes to write quite a bit, perhaps Watts and Mistletoe (Miragethechangeling's character) could meet up? It is but a suggestion of course, but I figure that since it was right at hoof, I might see if it was an option.

[Amanita 6,826]

@Blitz Boom and @Dji

I'm fine with that

[BloodDrops 762]

@Blitz Boom

Posted and it is a big post. 

 

3694 characters

Edited December 4, 2017 by BloodDrops

[Sekel 692]

@Blitz Boom & @MiragetheChangeling

I’m fine with Watts reentering via Mistletoe. Watts has just been at Sugarcube Corner this whole time.

[Amanita 6,826]

@Dji

But is it alright if it’s not like a personal relationship? Just like friends? Because I have plans for mah boy Mistletoe and mah girl Mirage. There is gonna be some Mistlerage up in here (maybe)!!

Edited December 5, 2017 by MiragetheChangeling

[Sekel 692]

@MiragetheChangeling

That’s fine with me. I don’t generally ship others with my characters in RPs unless both parties want it.

[Amanita 6,826]

@Dji

ok! That’s fine with me!

[Widdershins 9,959]

Was going to tentatively go out on hiatus until I could come back from my job without passing out the moment I got home buuuut...

@Blitz Boom & @~Phoenix~

 You think I didn't just see that because I totally just saw that! I'm like a all knowin' spirit or somethin' up in here!

 I have plans for that, indeed I do. Like, a sorta gift handed to me that is, it is. All I need is enough time to do my job and rest up before I can get back to the thread here proper. So sure, maybe B.B. can respond back in kind to the moment, but... I need that exact snapshot of the two coming into contact. I feel that a little interference is warranted to help in ways only a pandimensional being can. Who better to help somepony trapped between genders as a being without gender? Widdy is, after all, a helper!

 Jus-... Just give me the time th-there...

Edited December 5, 2017 by Widdershins
Mentions again...

[~Phoenix~ 196]

@Widdershins

I'm glad to see that you're excited. Had no idea you were watching that close. Now go, make Phoenix never want to kiss anypony ever again

Edited December 5, 2017 by ~Phoenix~

[Amanita 6,826]

@~Phoenix~ And @Widdershins

XD

[~Phoenix~ 196]

@MiragetheChangeling

Shush! Or I'll have widdershins sicked on you next!

[Sekel 692]

3 minutes ago, ~Phoenix~ said:

Shush! Or I'll have widdershins sicked on you next!

Widders is a lap dog now?

[Amanita 6,826]

@~Phoenix~  And @Widdershins

*pretends to be scared* ooh! I have Draquunucus OC to.

 

[~Phoenix~ 196]

Right. @MiragetheChangeling but you've never had to deal with widdershins. 

[Amanita 6,826]

@~Phoenix~ meh, I’m used to abnormal. And plus! I like pancakes.

[BloodDrops 762]

@MiragetheChangeling

Pleased to eat you

i mean meet you

^^

@Blitz Boom

Can I eat her though? Just her wings she don't need those

 

[Amanita 6,826]

@BloodDrops

Hello. But no you cannot eat me, I rather like my wings. Btw I read messages for bother people/ponies/beings. I’m a nosy pony, like my mom in real life XD

Edited December 5, 2017 by MiragetheChangeling

[Blitz Boom 4,621]

@BloodDrops @MiragetheChangeling

Eh, I'm sure they'll grow back. Munch away.

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@MiragetheChangeling @Dji

Good to see that you two are interested in joining forces. Can't wait to see what comes from it. ^^

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@~Phoenix~ @Widdershins

I wondered if you were going to see that, drat. Well, have a go then mate, though try not to destroy my house too much. Pleeeeease? It's expensive.

Also, I did not see your response here before I posted, but you still got your wish. They're still trapped in the moment essentially.

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EVERYPONY

Today's extra message is brought to you because I remembered that I'm likely gonna be away this weekend, so I'd owe a post. This evens that out.

[Amanita 6,826]

@Blitz Boom and @BloodDrops

Nuuuuuu!!! I dun wanna lose mah wings!

@Blitz Boom

I hope that was better and longer!

[~Phoenix~ 196]

@Blitz Boom well I hope you have a fun weekend! I'll refrain from posting until @Widdershins can make his reply. He just better not leave me waiting for too long!

[Amanita 6,826]

  @Blitz Boom

yeah! Have a good weekend!