Grin For Me (Vector #2 - Still working on getting better)

[NeverNeverland 1,940]

http://nnland.deviantart.com/#/d51gpqo

 

 

Done almost immediately after finishing up the first one. Edited and done today. There are somethings I'd like to edit, but I don't know how to very well, so this will do now. Opinions? Compliments? Criticisms? Dislikes?

 

Any advice would be great, by the way.

Edited June 16, 2012 by NeverNeverland

[Parties like Pinkie 385]

Seeing as I have no idea what the heck a Vector is, I say you did a pretty d*mn good job!

[NeverNeverland 1,940]

I say you did a pretty DAMN good job!

 

You don't need to hide the bad words on my threads dude, its all good. And thank you for the kind words.

[Nas 2,863]

Wow....I really don't see anything negative about this one! Your vectoring skills are obviously getting very better very fast!

[Chigens and Kay 3,831]

Amazing!

 

Much better then anything I could ever do. Keep at it!

[Bohtty 1,775]

Seeing as I have no idea what the heck a Vector is, I say you did a pretty d*mn good job!

 

http://mlpforums.com/topic/13023-what-is-a-vector-graphic-what-a-vector-graphic-actually-is/

Any advice would be great, by the way.

 

Well, If I had to be picky then maybe, don't use solid black in an image. You should use an off black, it just looks better usually.

[NeverNeverland 1,940]

Amazing! Much better then anything I could ever do. Keep at it!

 

Thank you. And now you've got your schmile. Happy?

 

Well, If I had to be picky then maybe, don't use solid black in an image. You should use an off black, it just looks better usually.

 

No no no! Picky is GOOD! In something like this brutal honesty is great for improvement.

[Bohtty 1,775]

No no no! Picky is GOOD! In something like this brutal honesty is great for improvement.

 

Well if you insist then...

The darker green around the mouth doesn't seem to work with MLP and I don't think I've seen it on any other vectors, maybe just dropping it? I don't really know how I would get that to work.

Additionally, the hair looks a bit stiff, but that's something you get better at with time.

Lastly, the eyes seem a bit off shape, the MLP eyes are usually a bit bigger and more ovaly.

img src:http://www.dragoart....magic-style.htm

Edited May 28, 2012 by Bohtty

[NeverNeverland 1,940]

Well if you insist then...

The darker green around the mouth doesn't seem to work with MLP and I don't think I've seen it on any other vectors, maybe just dropping it? I don't really know how I would get that to work.

Additionally, the hair looks a bit stiff, but that's something you get better at with time.

Lastly, the eyes seem a bit off shape, the MLP eyes are usually a bit bigger and more ovaly.

 

Exactly what meant. The reason for the hair looking stiff is because... well, I don't think I added any borders around it... it looks more incomplete, which is a slight problem that I want to fix. Other than that, I totally get at what you're saying.

[Chigens and Kay 3,831]

Thank you. And now you've got your schmile. Happy?

 

Exactly what I was looking for!

[~Chaos~ 3,966]

That's actually really awesome, i see nothing wrong, i don't know how to do vectors so i wouldn't know anything about them, Nicely done man really good stuff!

[MVC NVMXD JVRXD 2,406]

Brutal honest-ness.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=tK4XTIY_R2s#t=173s

Joking aside, good job! Especially if you're just starting out.

[NeverNeverland 1,940]

Brutal honest-ness.

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=tK4XTIY_R2s#t=173s

Joking aside, good job! Especially if you're just starting out.

 

Haha, I wouldn't mind getting pissed on by Skwisgaar! However, if it was Murderface...

 

...murder plans aside, thanks for the kind words!

[letterone 1,203]

Dat be good! I'm pretty sure I'd suck at vectors, seeing how I'm terrible at using drawing tablets.

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