Applejack the Pegasus - First GOOD vector

[Clarity 3,094]

So hi guys--some of you have probably seen my horrible first vector in the form of my OC Clarity.

 

Well, now I present y'all with another fail vector.

 

With the exception of her mane and eyelashes, all other parts are done by other people.

 

Well, gotta say I'm proud of it. She looks friggin gorgeous!

 

EDIT: It doesn't seem to pop up, so here's the link: http://i46.tinypic.com/30ju0id.jpg

Edited November 4, 2012 by Clarity

[Lightning Fluttershy 1,844]

Great work Clarity! I love it (although I've seen it already). I can't wait to see more from you and just you wait I'll have my vector done for you in no time.

[Luriel Maelstrom 253]

Very nice. Although, Applejack being a pegasus eeeh...I think wings make her less beautiful, but good job anyway, she has glorious eyes. =)

[DeiStar 248]

Very nice. Although, Applejack being a pegasus eeeh...I think wings make her less beautiful, but good job anyway, she has glorious eyes. =)

 

I agree. Why being a simple pegasus with wings, when you can be the unicorn master race with glorious magic and a mighty horn?

 

[Luriel Maelstrom 253]

I agree. Why being a simple pegasus with wings, when you can be the unicorn master race with glorious magic and a mighty horn?

 

Hmmmmm...nah. She looks more beautiful when she's earth pony. Besides, if she would be an Unicorn, she wouldn't have to work hard, and I am sure she likes me to work hard

[Devious Detonation 442]

The vector is pretty good... But it is missing the left wing.

There is nothing else that needs criticism...

Looks gorgeous. I am pretty impressed by your skills!

[Arrow 236]

The tail and mane seems so fluffy and wavy, it looks awesome!

 

Looks kinda weird without her hat though, hahaha

 

Criticism: The ear looks like it should face the other direction, or atleast to the side, as it is now it looks like... yeah, can't really be explained with words :s

[Jokuc 8,174]

@@Clarity,

Warning here comes Jokuc the joykiller

 

I don't know if these ponies can't see it or if they don't know it or whatever but it is not a great vector, I'm sorry. Infact it's not even a vector at all. As I am pretty sure it is when I look at it, I would say this is you taking a picture of another pony and manually drawing everything on top of that with Applejack's colors and hair, am I right? There's plenty of things that makes me believe so. First off when you look at the curves in her mane..

 

 

 

 

You can see that they aren't really smooth, which makes them look hand-drawn. Second, if you look at pretty much any outline on the image you can see that they aren't smooth either. Some of them doesn't even cover the original image.

 

 

 

 

And here's another thing that makes me sure this is hand drawn:

 

 

I don't even think I need to explain why.

 

 

 

So, now that I'm almost 100% sure this wasn't created as a vector, but as a normal butmap image, probably drawn in some program such as GIMP, Photoshop, Paint.NET, Paint Tool SAI etc, I must ask, do you actually know how to create vectors?

 

Anyways, if you actually took the time to draw everything yourself over the original I must say it's actually a pretty good work. There are some misstakes here and there, such as the forgotten left wing..

...And the forgotten right nose..

 

 

gotcha

 

 

Also I can see that when you removed the background to make it transparent, there's a few small pieces that aren't removen.

 

 

 

 

And I think it's sad that you didn't do the rest of her mane since it's cut off.

 

But.. I'm not saying this is bad work, because it isn't. Though, I'm not either a big fan of the Applejack with wings -thing.

 

I'm sorry if it was too much negative criticism.

[Nah 3,182]

Nice work, a little fuzzy here and there, but it's really well done!

 

Keep up the good work and take Jokuc's advice. I'd like to see some more.