I drew a Feld0 (Lineless)

[Leafeon 2,702]

I drew a Feld0. I was wondering if Feld0 would like to see it. Lineless, because I need lineless practise. Badly. 

 

Deviant Art link for people who don't hate me... :C

 

Any critique and such are welcome. Oh, and I hope you like it. :3

[Concord 1,982]

Hello!

 

Oh this is wonderful Firebolt! I'm sure Feld0 will be pleased amazed by this! There's nothing much i could critique, i don't have a critique's eye, so you only get compliments from me...

 

Very very nice!

[Scootalove 10,692]

I say ... well done.   I think Feld0 likes this already, he is probably looking at it from his high watchtower in his Canterlot office. I know you will always do a good job with art Firebolt, it is your calling or talent.

[Zygen 6,066]

Meh gusta . I like it, even if lineless ponies are a bit odd I guess to me since I'm so use to regular ponies, still looks pretty awesome to me .

 

Um, just so your Ego doesn't inflate to the size of a supernova, are the front hooves really that skinny o-o? I'm not really sure I'm just kinda asking since it just looks so skinny to me. Then again I'm not great at proportions so yeah .

 

Just trying(And failing) to find something to critique hehe.

 

Wonderful job as always though Firebolt .

[Leafeon 2,702]

Hello!

 

Oh this is wonderful Firebolt! I'm sure Feld0 will be pleased amazed by this! There's nothing much i could critique, i don't have a critique's eye, so you only get compliments from me...

 

Very very nice!

You can't even critique the terrible, terrible wings? OCD critique ftw.

 

 

 

Meh gusta . I like it, even if lineless ponies are a bit odd I guess to me since I'm so use to regular ponies, still looks pretty awesome to me .

 

Um, just so your Ego doesn't inflate to the size of a supernova, are the front hooves really that skinny o-o? I'm not really sure I'm just kinda asking since it just looks so skinny to me. Then again I'm not great at proportions so yeah .

 

Just trying(And failing) to find something to critique hehe.

 

Wonderful job as always though Firebolt .

I always make the front legs really skinny, and exaggerate it more for alicorns. It looks better, IMO.

[fluffpudge 148]

Very impressive! I like how the lighting gives the body a gradient-like color; it's interesting.  

 

As far as critique goes (and I apologize if I mention something that's already been said by another user), I do think the tail might be a bit high up in position. The feet seem a bit clunky; I think you might have addressed that as just being a personal preference of yours? I do feel the back legs should be thinned up a little bit towards the hoof.

 

In addition to that, the blue-blue shading isn't sitting well with me- I think it might just be a contrast issue- it doesn't look bad, it just looks off for some reason?

 

But other than that- a lovely piece!

[Leafeon 2,702]

Very impressive! I like how the lighting gives the body a gradient-like color; it's interesting.  

 

As far as critique goes (and I apologize if I mention something that's already been said by another user), I do think the tail might be a bit high up in position. The feet seem a bit clunky; I think you might have addressed that as just being a personal preference of yours? I do feel the back legs should be thinned up a little bit towards the hoof.

 

In addition to that, the blue-blue shading isn't sitting well with me- I think it might just be a contrast issue- it doesn't look bad, it just looks off for some reason?

 

But other than that- a lovely piece!

I ALWAYS HAVE A PROBLEM WITH TAIL PLACEMENT.

 

And, yes, I like my legs being a bit exaggerated like that. It looks more elegant in my opinion.

 

I don't see what's wrong with the shading, other then the wings, though...

[fluffpudge 148]

I ALWAYS HAVE A PROBLEM WITH TAIL PLACEMENT.

 

And, yes, I like my legs being a bit exaggerated like that. It looks more elegant in my opinion.

 

I don't see what's wrong with the shading, other then the wings, though...

 

No worries on the shading- it might just be something that looks off to just me; there's nothing wrong with it, it's just the contrast that's making me sorta go 'huh?' to it. xD No worries!