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so it is the past of Equestria, Luna is still banned to the moon.. a group of ponies changed the story but they have long been forgotten... everypony has a special talent... but not every talent is so special...

 

a new menance, something different from magic.. the terrible living condition of the hearth ponies helped them developing new machinery and way to improve theyr work... but machines can be used for evil or for good... a new movement of "liberation" against Celestia guided by Dr. Grordbort's (a cyborg heart pony) wants to take over Equestria, leaving the magic of friendship into the hand of the power of a new Funhrer... Celestia ask his royal guards to fight this movement but they all fail... a decision has been made... a group of special ponies should be formed to fight the mechanical menance.... guided by Captain Doctor Electron Volt and his Liutenant Nightstrike they decide to go all over Equestria to find ponies with enough power and abilities to fight...

 

The base is a flying Zeppelin fortress built by me(doc volt), the "Zeppelpony" (picture above) with a basic crew of royal guards (wich serves only as crew they don't fight)

 

we need some main caracthers

 

i will be the captain of the ship but not of the group, everypony is free, they have been called here with a different promise, i have been offered moneys for my research, you have been offered, i don't know, a light on your past? Others what they neded, we are mercenaries

 

-Doc Volt(tecnology and steam punk weaoponary)

-Nightstrike(the spy, invisible pony, needed for recon, intelligence and all the mandatorty and vital stuff, also spec ops)

-a woman bat pony(Moonlight) (needed for agility, strong, and ability to.. convince.. she can be immortal since she is like a vampire

-the enemy (me and wayzer will RP him)

 

other ponies who will join the rp, we should need a

-sniper, very good with guns

-a twin personality.. like doctor jekyll and mister hyde

 

other ponies with special talents

 

rules?

 

-NO ALICORN except moonlight

-people should tell when they leave the RP so we can make theyr OC dissapear in a smooth way for the story

-i want to end this rp! i have doon tons and noone never ended!

 

-this will be in a steampunk period,around 1900... first world war weapons and tanks (weapons are only used by the enemy and the sniper.. is one of the invention that the liberation front has.. aside with tanks)

- they are more tecnological although theyr unicorns aren't really skilled with magic, the same goes for theyr pegasus but enemy unicorns have chemical potions wich gives them more power, pegasus has jetpacks and planes, hearth ponies has guns the only tecnological thing we have is our ships and some gadgets, altought they will later copy it... there will be an air war and we lose the ship wich is destroyed

-we initially hate each other but somehow the magic of the friendship helps us (with some sacrifice)

-science is not bad, is in the same level of magic (not as the magic of friendship btw)

-the reason of the formation of the evil movement is because of they lack of ability with theyr natural stuff (strongness for hearth ponies, good flying, ability with magic) and theyr will to improve using external aid (a.k.a. science), we need to kill the evil doctor but not killing all of this ponies, it will be better to convince them that they have other skills.. but war is war so we don't cry for a kill

- we are tecnological inferior... but better than them if they don't have theyr tecnological aid

-this is 1900... steampunk.. so if you have some gadgets think accordingly

 

so tell me what do you think... also.. shipping and love stories are REALLY WELL WELCOMED

 

 

 

who joined

 

Doc.Volt with OC: Doc Volt as Zeppelpony ship captain

Waizer107 with OC: Nightstrike as Liutenant

moonlight7starshine with OC: moonlight as a batpony vampire

Thunder-Dash with OC: Thunder-Dash as himself (electrical magic and powers)

Frosty V as sniper????

GameytheGeemer with ChainMail as psycopatic multipersonality killing machine... can you sleep at night mate?

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I would really like to join, but there's just one thing that's bugging me. You have a Mary-Sue in this RP. You say no Alicorns for others, yet you put Moonlight as immortal. That's one element that would retract audiences away. 

 

 

 

-ponies should tell when they live so we can kill theyr charachters

 

 

So you're saying here, that our characters cannot kill others and your characters are searching to kill them?

 

The overall idea is just confusing. 

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I would love to join this RP! If I can I would like to use my OC Jaeger. I'm stuck on mobile so I cant post a link :(

 

Btw he would best fit as the sniper because of his knowledge of fire arms.

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ok ok let me explain... if somepony wants to leave the RP can please tell us? so we can use theyr OC to remove them from the story in a smooth way ok? Moonlight is a alicorn bat pony but she is way weaker than a normal alicorn so she is just normal, that's the exception... sorry all..

characters can kill each other but we are supposed to be a squad

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i "fixed" what i meant to say

also i forgot to say about Moonlight... she is immortal since she is somehow already dead in this story.. i would like her to be something like a vampire or Dorian gray if she doesn't mind, but everypony just need to tell me and i change everything

 

that means that she can be killed, but she can't die of aging

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just immortal by age i meant to say... like you never grow old, but you can be killed by a bullet just like a normal pony

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Since you already invited me, how can I say no to the Multiple Personality Disordered all-around weapons & demolitions specialist Chain Mail

just remember mate, 1900XD they have automatic guns, we have bolt action rifles as the maximum tecnology, they have grenades, you have dynamite... keep in mind this XD i know you like to have super tecno suits and stuffs

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I would really like to join, but there's just one thing that's bugging me. You have a Mary-Sue in this RP. You say no Alicorns for others, yet you put Moonlight as immortal. That's one element that would retract audiences away. 

 

 

 

 

 

So you're saying here, that our characters cannot kill others and your characters are searching to kill them?

 

The overall idea is just confusing. 

sorry mate, is everything clear now?


Btw if you desperately need a link I should be able to post one soon.

we are not going to start today mate :) you are already in.. everypony is

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@@Doc. Volt,

 

Okay so I'm debating whether to enter this RP as Thunder Dash or Rocket. With Rocket, he's a cyborg, with Thunder, he's got them electric abilities. Which one do you think I should enter?

 

Here's links to the two:

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/rocket-r4838

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thunder-dash-r1861 

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now since moonlight will be killed like instantly if she gets a bullet through the heart or head those area's will be really  protected same goes for her neck so she went get decapitated so if your going to kill her you better be really smart to conjure up a plan to do so.

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@@Doc. Volt,

 

Okay so I'm debating whether to enter this RP as Thunder Dash or Rocket. With Rocket, he's a cyborg, with Thunder, he's got them electric abilities. Which one do you think I should enter?

 

Here's links to the two:

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/rocket-r4838

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/thunder-dash-r1861 

Well volt has electrical abilities so I'd go for the cyborg

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i don't know mate, i prefer the looking of your main OC but my OC has electrical ability too :(, well not advanced like yours, i can only gather energy, i am more an engineer, you OC uses lightining as a form of magic, but rocket is a cyborg.. uhm.. maybe too advanced for the storical period? also because the Villain is a cyborg too... well the choice is up to you.. wich one do you prefer?

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now since moonlight will be killed like instantly if she gets a bullet through the heart or head those area's will be really  protected same goes for her neck so she went get decapitated so if your going to kill her you better be really smart to conjure up a plan to do so.

Yeah, we're probably gonna have a lot of stormtrooper effect. So main characters won't die easily. It won't gonna be like they can beat 100 enemies and still be standing though

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i don't know mate, i prefer the looking of your main OC but my OC has electrical ability too :(, well not advanced like yours, i can only gather energy, i am more an engineer, you OC uses lightining as a form of magic, but rocket is a cyborg.. uhm.. maybe too advanced for the storical period? also because the Villain is a cyborg too... well the choice is up to you.. wich one do you prefer?

Yeah, I knew you would say that...oh well, Thunder Dash it is. 

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damn ninja zaizer! XD

 

ok so wayzer said that, you can go with rocket.. btw moonlight, if she die the choiche is up to you! I don't drive the RP, i just use my OC and with zayzer we plan the movement of the enemy, everything else is decided by users, i would prefer than no good pony die, so moonlight.. but the choiche is yours! it is a ropleplay not a fanfic!

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