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7 hours ago, Shadow Beam said:

Stay on topic peeps, remember that anything that does not directly pertain to Harra's story should be discussed through PM and not this thread. :please:

OK, OK, I'm sorry; I just felt it was the least I could do if Hierok is giving me so much help on my fanfic.

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So, this idea needs a lot of work and any plot holes or anything like that are because this is only starting to form. So, I was thinking, I really want the show to end with a big, game-changing finale

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Sounds interesting but I rather doubt that will go like that, rather fits(As you have standing in the title) for an interesting FanFic though, I wouldn't mind reading it!^^

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Stay on topic peeps, remember that anything that does not directly pertain to Harra's story should be discussed through PM and not this thread. 

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2 hours ago, Harratot33 said:

So, Tirek's Reform is all done now :D 

It looks fine, but isn't bon bon special agent sweetie drops, and not Lyra. :)

If I don't understand something or Interpret it wrong, I'm dutch. Sometimes I gamble for meanings of the words. And sometimes I write the wrong words, like week and weak for example. Sorry for it already. :smug:

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On 21/08/2017 at 10:01 PM, Hierok said:

It looks fine, but isn't bon bon special agent sweetie drops, and not Lyra. :)

Do you think Starswirl's Return is going alright so far? I really want the end of the trilogy to be high-impact, you see!

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On 26-8-2017 at 8:43 PM, Harratot33 said:

Do you think Starswirl's Return is going alright so far? I really want the end of the trilogy to be high-impact, you see!

Haven't red it yet. Been very, very busy last week, so I will read it when I have the time. :twi:

If I don't understand something or Interpret it wrong, I'm dutch. Sometimes I gamble for meanings of the words. And sometimes I write the wrong words, like week and weak for example. Sorry for it already. :smug:

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57 minutes ago, Hierok said:

Haven't red it yet. Been very, very busy last week, so I will read it when I have the time. :twi:

No rush, dude, don't worry :) You don't have to read any of it if you don't want to!

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On 27/08/2017 at 8:42 PM, Hierok said:

Haven't red it yet. Been very, very busy last week, so I will read it when I have the time. :twi:

So, the fanfiction as a whole is completely DONE now! Man, what a journey it's been! I know it's far from perfect, but I certainly gave it my and all and I have to say I'm pretty pleased with the results :D 

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10 hours ago, Harratot33 said:

So, the fanfiction as a whole is completely DONE now! Man, what a journey it's been! I know it's far from perfect, but I certainly gave it my and all and I have to say I'm pretty pleased with the results :D 

I shall give a look this week. Sorry for not replieing the last weeks, but it has been busy for me since I have to read 7 more books in 3 languages before Februari. :)

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If I don't understand something or Interpret it wrong, I'm dutch. Sometimes I gamble for meanings of the words. And sometimes I write the wrong words, like week and weak for example. Sorry for it already. :smug:

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On 9/18/2017 at 6:46 AM, Hierok said:

I shall give a look this week. Sorry for not replieing the last weeks, but it has been busy for me since I have to read 7 more books in 3 languages before Februari. :)

Wow!!!

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On 9/18/2017 at 6:46 AM, Hierok said:

I shall give a look this week. Sorry for not replieing the last weeks, but it has been busy for me since I have to read 7 more books in 3 languages before Februari. :)

Oh my gosh, the plot summaries for the Season 7 finale have been leaked and...

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Starswirl the Bearded is revealed to still be alive in them!

...great minds think alike, or what? Sunburst is in the episodes, too; seems like there's gonna be a few similarities with my fanfiction :o 

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8 hours ago, Harratot33 said:

Oh my gosh, the plot summaries for the Season 7 finale have been leaked and...

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Starswirl the Bearded is revealed to still be alive in them!

...great minds think alike, or what? Sunburst is in the episodes, too; seems like there's gonna be a few similarities with my fanfiction :o 

Yes, I wonder how the episode is gonna turn out. I hope for you the same way as your fanfic. ;)

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If I don't understand something or Interpret it wrong, I'm dutch. Sometimes I gamble for meanings of the words. And sometimes I write the wrong words, like week and weak for example. Sorry for it already. :smug:

Discord, Twilight, Sunset, Fluttershy, Starlight, Rarity, Luna, Celestia, Big MCintosh, Cadence, Shining, Minuette, Lyra, Rara, Sweetie Belle, Cheerilee, Derpy, Spike.

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