Steampunk Rainbow Dash

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

Hey everypony

I've been working on a Steampunk version of Rainbow Dash, I think I'm finished but it doesn't look right any suggestions on how I can change it? Go easy on me, it's my first proper MLP art work XD

[Pizzly 57]

um make her a pony no kidding this is really good i love steam punk stuff

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

um make her a pony no kidding this is really good i love steam punk stuff

 

Thanks XD but were you joking about making her a pony now? XD

[Pizzly 57]

maybe i bet it would look fine either way

[pondus30 152]

Looks good!

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

Looks good!

 

Thanks but any recommendations on anything I must change?

[pondus30 152]

Thanks but any recommendations on anything I must change?

 

Not that i can see

[Finesthour 7,286]

I think I may like this picture a little too much...

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

I think I may like this picture a little too much...

 

Really? I'm so happy~~~

do you have any recommendations on anything I must change?

[Finesthour 7,286]

Well if you want me to nitpick...

 

Her chin looks like a mans.

 

Make it a little more rounded.

 

I believe Rainbow has blue eyes.

 

The rainbow order is off I believe.

 

But tat is just nitpicking

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

Well if you want me to nitpick...

 

Her chin looks like a mans.

 

Make it a little more rounded.

 

I believe Rainbow has blue eyes.

 

The rainbow order is off I believe.

 

But tat is just nitpicking

 

i thought it looked quite masculine when I was drawing it XD and here's a reference picture:

[Finesthour 7,286]

Ah, I mis-read the orange as yellow.

 

My mistake.

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

Ah, I mis-read the orange as yellow.

 

My mistake.

 

Haha that's alright XD. I'll work on the jaw, where must I round it?

[D1SC0RD 987]

It looks great

 

Again, the chin could use a touch-up, and perhaps her left pit as well.

 

Other than that, it's fantastic (:

[Finesthour 7,286]

 

The chin looks very manly.

 

Try to round out the cheeks a little more.

[Nah 3,181]

:notbad:

[I used to be a stranger 7,989]

Methinks you need to have some practice on Life drawing, Sudnifisent. Weight and volume need improvement, although composition and colour selection are spot on.

[Doctor XFizzle 8,651]

Looks pretty darn great to me, leagues above what I could ever draw/color

[Inkfeather 597]

That is one pointy chin right there. Oh well, nice job anyway mate!

[FLARE 951]

keep up the good work I look forward to seeing some more art from you in the future.

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

Methinks you need to have some practice on Life drawing, Sudnifisent. Weight and volume need improvement, although composition and colour selection are spot on.

 

Heh-heh ^^' I don't usually draw this style XD I usually draw anime style which is a lot more basic XD but thanks.

That is one pointy chin right there. Oh well, nice job anyway mate!

 

haha, I guess I REALLY need to work on the chin

keep up the good work I look forward to seeing some more art from you in the future.

 

Thanks I have a deviantart account if you want to see more but this is my first proper MLP piece the rest is anime and stuff.

Looks pretty darn great to me, leagues above what I could ever draw/color

 

Thank you very much

 

It looks great

 

Again, the chin could use a touch-up, and perhaps her left pit as well.

 

Other than that, it's fantastic (:

 

Thanks but what must I do to her pit?

[D1SC0RD 987]

It seems a little low, to me. Maybe raise it? s:

 

It just doesn't look proper to me.

[5guysburgersnfries 216]

It seems a little low, to me. Maybe raise it? s:

 

It just doesn't look proper to me.

 

Holy crap! how did I miss tha!? thanks for pointing it out XD

[D1SC0RD 987]

Anytime

[Finesthour 7,286]

I am making this my background.

 

I don't change my background often.

 

You win.