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  1. FortyShadows
    It's Dashie walking back into her house with a paint bucket.
  2. FortyShadows
    I'm terrible at drawing Pinkie's mane...I'd need a ref everytime. Anyways: -Mane's great! -Eyes are too small -Tail seems too big -Front legs seem too close to back legs -Flank could be rounder X3 Anyway, just practice--it's close to show-accurate imo.
  3. FortyShadows
    Woah that's a nice OC! I really like it. Here's some criticism so that future drawings of it can be 20% cooler: -Ears too far back -Make sure the front hind leg is longer than the back hind leg -Higher front leg's width too consistent -Needs nostril -Body needs to be rounder, esp at front -Tail should be thicker to match mane, although that's my own opinion
  4. FortyShadows
    Oh you know what? *steals ALL the tea and crumpets* *OM NOM NOM...sip...NOM NOM NOM NOM*
  5. FortyShadows
    A drawing or two every week sounds great! You're a newbie? Everypony is one at some point. Just keep practicing. Here's some criticism: 1st pic: -Body is too long -Legs bend too sharply -Head could be rounder -Use a reference for the wings -I like the colours and cutie mark ^^ 2nd: -Use a reference for the head -Ears seem to come out the sides too much -I'm not sure how tilted the head is. Here are some things I'm not sure about for your second pic (Anyone else reading this could help me, that'd be great XD ) -Are eyes supposed to be that tilted? -Does the mane go to both sides or just one?
  6. FortyShadows
    Wow, I never thought of actually doing that. +1 for awesome. Also, I don't think this belongs in the non-pony art section since it's about Rarity, no?
  7. FortyShadows
    Yay for element of laughter....SLAUGHTER. woah there. Anyway, what program did you use to make this GIF?
  8. FortyShadows
    That is a really awesome idea. m/It's good practice for group drawing too, since right now I only draw one character at a time... But then again I might be lazy and abandon the idea like I sometimes do.
  9. FortyShadows
    That's a really good idea, I've never tried drawing the magic glow before. Might turn out strange using pencil though.
  10. FortyShadows
    I only used a ref for the guitar and nothing else, so some things might be off.
  11. FortyShadows
    Well uh that's quite interesting...It's funny cuz Dashie has two necks. Anyway, did you use photoshop?
  12. FortyShadows
    Watch out, you're gonna scare some foals. -Body could be rounder -Bottom of legs should be wider than top -Make sure proportions of all ponies are equal -In second picture, left pony's legs are too short and head too big You might want to use references or draw pics with less ponies first for practice.
  13. FortyShadows
    That's a nice dark idea you got there. I was expecting the pony to have them Pinkamena derp eyes. Anyway, body's too long and legs are too straight. The eyes can be larger and face rounder. Is your mane style supposed to be like Dashie's by any chance?
  14. FortyShadows
    Cringe? As the others have mentioned, the beginning/end. I usually just skip the intro. A few episodes were kinda bad but I still forced myself to watch through them. Also, I'm the watch-every-episode-only-once-then-kyro type, but I don't like watching the sad snippets (discorded Twi is broken-heart-shaped tears) because then I start crying like Pinkie. (Not really, else that'd be scary.)
  15. FortyShadows
    Mind Fk
  16. FortyShadows
    Well, that's an interesting idea. 9_6 You should take some more time to make sure the ponies look show accurate, or at least similar in proportion. For example, the head sizes of all three ponies seem off. Derpy's hindlegs could be longer too, and you forgot her bubblewraptastic cutie mark. Her eyes seem a little too small too. Also, is it me or does Discord's neck seem a teeny bit too long? o_O As I suggested with another group drawing. If you're drawing a bunch of ponies together, you might as well add in a background. Well, all you have to do is practice.
  17. FortyShadows
    That's not really rough. To me, rough is a pencil only sketch with the circle and base lines still showing. It's still an interesting drawing though. Anyway, the front legs could be closer together, and the body rounder.
  18. FortyShadows
    I really like the first one, with the pose and all. Also, in the second one, Pinkamena reminds me of a shark. "
  19. FortyShadows
    Ok. Critique time I guess. OC: -All dem clothes. Anthro? I'm kidding; I think it works out. -Tail should point downwards and be less "messy" -Snout is either pointing down too much or your hat's pointing up too much -Wing feathers should have gaps in between and be thicker -Neck isn't aligned with body -Hooves should be more rounded Other things: -Paper has a lot of smudges that should be erased -A background would be cool -Right changeling's eyes are too close together That's all I can see...
  20. FortyShadows
    Really good for a first vector. I think that some lines can be thicker though. Also, a background would be nice, but watch out for perspective!
  21. FortyShadows
    Banned for having a not pony signature.
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  23. FortyShadows
    That looks really well done. You might want to use close-up mode on your camera to capture more detail. The line going through the ear should be farther away from the edge and the tail should be thinner at the top, then go thicker, then thinner again. (Like exaggerate that a little more on the tail) You can also try some shading.
  24. FortyShadows
    What I gunna do? Nothing! You just need to practice to get better. Also, your OC looks really close to Dashie.
  25. FortyShadows
    Alicorn? W00t! Tips: Make blue outlines more noticeable and cleaner The background seems like some fire. You can try to add lighting effects onto your pony. Is that your OC in your avatar? If it is, use eyedropper tool for accuracy. Body could be thinner and face rounder
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