Yay for firsts!
Critique so second drawing's >20% cooler than this one. ^^
-Eyes should be smaller
-Cuts off at top and sides, draw smaller or scan the whole pic in ^^
-Body should be rounder
-Front legs should be thicker and closer together
-Tail could go left (The hind legs are left of the front legs so I'd put the tail on the left)
-Wings should be aligned
-Some strokes could be cleaner
Also, did you use pen and pencil crayons? O_O