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FortyShadows

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  1. Nice work Picasso! I like that eye. ^^ But seriously, that's an interesting idea! Brohoof for you!
  2. LET'S DO THIS!Can't wait to see re-corrected version!...it's lagging though so I'm not gonna check.
  3. hnnnnnnng wait wrong picture sorry. AHH!!!!!!!!! obv my sketch has a few proportion errors too, which show on the vector. XD The outline colour for the horn doesn't match that of the skin, oh noes. And make more vectors!...if you want to that is. You're good. ^^
  4. Nice experiment, and I love that style! "Rairty's lowerside of her horn is bit weird looking." yeah. Maybe you can extend the straight line farther down instead of ending it on one of those curved lines.
  5. Yeah, I can see that you try. That IS quite stylized, and as a result I can't really critique much. Looks good though imo!
  6. Yay for ponysonas! You want a critique? You got one! -eye should be larger -lines should be less sloppy (take your time) -ear could be pointier, and the line on the ear should be lower and not touch the edge of the ear -front legs could be skinnier at top -horn should be at a 45 degree angle and be pointer tip: keep drawing! Maybe you could draw her in another pose. ^^
  7. I liek dat style. Might as well try copying it muahaha...I mean it's great, keep it up!
  8. Just needs a reference for proportion work -hooves should get larger, not smaller, as they extend from the body. They can also be longer -female? needs eyelashes. -needs nostrils -body a bit long I like the colours though! Draw more plz. ^^
  9. This is the best reasoning I've ever seen! I can use this in debates!
  10. Yeah that's the only thing that I think could improve...although I can't find any way to improve it. T_T"Looks great so far!
  11. Seems like we have a Dashie recolouring over here...with a horn. Yay! That's quite a sharp horn though. But it's cool. ^^ I like the Cutie mark too.
  12. Yeah I say it's really well done!
  13. Why'd you make up such a "generous" plan? Thought it was actually gonna work? ^^
  14. Well then it's time for you to start drawing some more. ^_~ Also, picture looks awesome! Dat pencil thickness variation.
  15. Yay for firsts! Critique so second drawing's >20% cooler than this one. ^^ -Eyes should be smaller -Cuts off at top and sides, draw smaller or scan the whole pic in ^^ -Body should be rounder -Front legs should be thicker and closer together -Tail could go left (The hind legs are left of the front legs so I'd put the tail on the left) -Wings should be aligned -Some strokes could be cleaner Also, did you use pen and pencil crayons? O_O
  16. You choose whatever colours! ^^ Critique: -Horn should be at 45 degrees and only needs three grooves. -Horn and ear don't need to be that sharp. -Face could be rounder, especially the snout. -That back of the leg got a spike! Spike! Shouldn't you be helping Twi at the library? -Tail seems a little small -You're female? EYELASHES YAY! That's a creative hairstyle though!
  17. lol this drawing just gave me an idea! *Bumps into light Scoot style brohoof for you.
  18. Aww Derpy doesn't look happy. *Gives Derpy a hug. Anyway, face and eyes could be rounder and brush strokes cleaner. ^^
  19. Mane colour seems a bit off and face could be more round! But I see what you did there sooo bad. ^^
  20. Have it your way! I've no opinions on this other than the fact that I won't be sleeping for a while. x3 Also, are you vectoring over my sketch because the face seems a little flattened...ah well I blame myself. *rolleyes
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