dark How I became Equestrian

[gamecubeguy214 2,512]

It was a normal day, me sitting on the computer. My TV turned on, I was the only one home, and the computer was over ten feet away from the TV. I heard the alert siren, the words saying, ''Asteroid large as Venus crashing in 5 minutes''. I panicked, grabbing all of my special things in one place to feel a tiny bit safer. My recorder, my first stuffed animal, my GameCube. My parents were on the safe side of the planet, they visited the edge of Australia for a fun little trip, but they forgot me like I didn't exist. 5. 4. 3. 2. 1. The asteroid crashed. It crashed at a speed of 963 light years per second. It crashed down so hard, it made a hole in our lovely little planet. I fell through it, not crushed. I was going through space at 77 miles per second. Just when I was about to die in a tenth of a second, I landed on something. Something soft. I didn't even see it. It wasn't a star, it wasn't a planet, it wasn't a black hole, I didn't know what it was. It looked cartoonish and a little bit.. familiar. Slow piano music played. I heard a noise behind me. It reminded me of teleportation. I turn around, Celestia is there. I say in surprise, ''Celestia?'' Then she thinks she understands, saying, ''Oh, you must be from the world Twilight went to.'' I said in slight surprise, ''Uh, no, I-'' Celestia pulled out a knife, shouting in anger. ''Well then how do you know my name?'' I screamed, ''No, don't kill me! Our planet has TVs, they showed Equestria there!'' Celestia understands a bit. ''How did you get here?'' she says, in her normal tone of voice. ''An asteroid that made a hole in my planet, I fell in, I almost died.'' Celestia stated, ''Well then, welcome to Equestria. This is our home planet. Since you came a brony, you have the right to choose your race. Unicorn, pegasus, or a simple Earth pony?'' I already knew what race I wanted to be, it was unicorn, I chose unicorn. My view slowly shrunk. It shrunk until all I saw was black. Then I saw flashbacks, from when I was a fetus, to when I was born, to when I started gaming, to when I started liking MLP. Then it showed the present. The family had returned home. The hole had been filled in, except for where I was, at the computer. They looked down into it, they saw space. I was playing Minecraft, and I was on the death screen when I heard about the asteroid. It said, ''You died!'' My family had thought that that meant I had died. But then above the hole, reflective grey words had appeared. ''Jump into the hole, see the world of My Little Pony.'' They all agreed it was a scam. They were sobbing, bawling. The vision shrunk, all I saw was black. A green dot appeared. Then my entire sight was filled with green. I heard screaming, then I was landed onto the ground, then all the ponies looked at me, thinking I was an alien. Fluttershy flew over and asked, ''What are you? I've never seen anything like it!'' I answered, ''I'm a human, I came here because of impact on my planet, though I do know about Equestria, and all the ponies there.'' Fluttershy happily excaimed, ''Oh, another sort of animal that can speak my language!'' I was pretty sure Earth originally spoke that language. I was a human, but within 24 hours, I'd fully turn into a unicorn. Since I didn't have a home there, I asked everypony where I could be until my house is built. To sleep, I picked Applejack because the comfiest thing I could sleep on was blocks of hay. The next morning, I was a unicorn by then. I had my horn, I was still acting like a human, I got up standing and walking like one. I walked and everypony kept staring at me. I got on my front hooves at once. Every night, I would bawl, missing my family and friends, but also smile because I lived in Equestria then, and now I am an Equestrian unicorn, still learning levitation magic. Spike can send notes from here to Earth, and my life wasn't really the same.

 

 

Since you can't make two polls, was this fanfic happy, sad, or emotionless?

[Darius 70]

It was okay I guess.... very short and bad grammar though, nice idea. 

[Empty Room 512]

I'll make it short... 



10/10 it's okay.

[iDashingRainbow 95]

9/10. I would've put 10 but... Pace is too fast.

[gamecubeguy214 2,512]

It was okay I guess.... very short and bad grammar though, nice idea. 

 

I'll make it short... 

 

 

 

10/10 it's okay.

 

9/10. I would've put 10 but... Pace is too fast.

I've made a better version. You can read it here. https://mlpforums.com/topic/133107-how-i-became-equestrian-better-version/