Rate My Drawings Please

[Yin Yang 43]

Here are some of my first pony drawings, if you could tell me how to make them better that would be great. I think I'm getting the hang of it and I think I need to draw them in different poses and maybe wearing clothes. Enjoy!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Night Shine 767]

The first one is amazing. Very simplistic, and yet there really are no flaws I can see. Great job!

 

The second is also really good, although the body seems a bit too big in the front and too small in the back.

 

The third's head is too big, but besides that it seems great.

 

 

Overall, nice work! Way better than I could do.

[Vengeance 84]

The Rainbow Dash one is just awesome. I think it would be better with some color added to it, otherwise she would just be Dash..

Edited January 6, 2013 by Vengeance

[Rainbow Dash Loyalty 1,274]

They're nice drawings for your first attempts, but I have to say that your Rainbow Dash looks a bit too rushed >.< You also forgot to add her mouth, also the way you colored her mane and tail is kind of scribbled and wobbly.

 

Although the bottom two look neat and smooth, I especially like their cutie marks!

Keep up the good work!

[PinkiePai 181]

Now, I'm not an expert, but this is my honest opinion.

 

First one is 9/10

 

Second one can be fixed.

 

- Smaller breast

- Thinner legs

- Bigger waist 

- Smaller forehead

- Bigger snout, ears and eyes ( eyes also more egg-like, and the other eye would be less visible from this perspective)

- Left hind leg too curved

- More detailed mane

 

 

I don't really know what to think of the 3rd one... I never liked how stallions looked in the show anyway. Their snout is always weird.

Edited January 6, 2013 by PinkiePai

[Yin Yang 43]

Mostly the proportions are a little bit out because I tried to draw them from different angles and I don't think it worked.

 

I can draw another Rainbow Dash, in colour and less rushed.

 

And lastly, I'll keep drawing them!