Princess Luna

[20%RainbowDash 17]

Hey guys, I just wanted to post a first draft on a Princess Luna Sketch I'm working on. Any suggestions as to what I should change before making a color one? I think her ear may be a bit on the big side, and the tail needs to go in between the moon and her hoof, instead of behind both. Anyway, thanks for the views and suggestions.

[Rocco 567]

looks like you have everything in your sights to fix bro! the onlything i can see is the right rear hind quarter is a bit off but i cant put my finger on what it is thats off. personally i like the bigger ear, gives character! show accurate stuff is good and all but adding your own touches makes it art! 

[Fluttershyfan94 5,744]

This looks awesome, can't see anything major wrong with it, the ears are fine. The only thing i can see that might have gone better.. would have been the wings.. Although, im not sure about that.. I would just colour it how it is... It looks good as it is now, once you start doing changes to it, it often ends up destroying the drawing. But if your making another, not just changing this one, i would check out references, with the wings. This looks great, great work.

[kyoki wolfe 134]

Thats awesome.... the hair looks a little weird.... It's not exactly placed correctly but who am I to complain.   It's nice...way more accurate than some. 

[Scootalove 10,689]

Luna looks so cute when she is flying around the breathtaking night sky. I'd have to say that this is a work of art to be shown at Bronycons. The fun has been doubled, so good job.

 

Edited March 2, 2013 by ~Chaotic Lightning~

[Zygen 6,066]

This is a great wonderful piece of art bro . I can't say much is wrong with it really. I think I might agree with you the ears a little bit big, but even then I'm not sure if very much at all.

 

Its looking great, and It'll look even better I'm sure when its colored .

[Hinkie_Pie 5]

I really like it a lot! Her cutie mark and horn are perfect! Is there a reason the moon is placed in front of her? I would love to see it in color!

[joeyRpony 13]

Wow, awesome work! Love the shading and the sketching! Keep up the great work and wish you good luck to your future art pieces.