Book Horse

What if you aren't listening to a song? How about the song you last listened to? Well I was listening to this about 5 hours ago... I'm a big minecrafter by the way...

Just whyy wold anyy body nott sayy four letr word?? Buut this iiss kina hard only sayn four letr word andd even aaaa litl more hrdr than sayn anyy thin buut four letr word andd iimm havn trbl stil even thoo iimm brak iinn thee rule! That will probably be just as hard to read as it was to type.

I honestly don't know...

I'd let those two lovers have a nice bed. I'd be outnumbered anyway, so what else can I do?

No...just, no. I'll pass.

I would say female. Your face looks like either gender, but I thought I saw, uhh...'circles' in the chest area.

Nice idea. That had me hanging on edge just listening to the idea! Though there are many brony in Equestria stories I may do this thx!

Apparently there is an error connecting to the attached files. I can neither read nor download it. As for the prologue, it sound a bit like the actual show mlp:fim. However I still liked it and see the differences in it. There were no mistakes in it as far as I could see, but all I can look at is the prologue, not the story itself.

Thanks, I'll check yours out. I didn't know this was someone Else's though. But this is just the prologue, and hopefully the rest hasn't already been made. Also where does it say Shining is a plumber? Thanks, I'll change it to Candance. This is my first fanfic btw, and this is just the prologue. I've already written about half of the first chapter. thanks for the feedback. Thanks, and it was rushed. I was trying to get it done before dinner. I only had about 10 minutes to write it and about 1 minute to edit. I'll work on it, however.

Original Thread: http://mlpforums.com/topic/87127-what-do-you-think-of-my-idea/ I've started so many topics about this, asking for your opinion. But I think I finally have my fanfic idea! Here's the prologue of the story and the first bit of chapter one. Be honest with what you think, and don't hold back! Prologue Princess Candance was reading a book in her bedroom. It was dark and stormy outside. Candance flipped the page. Then there was a tremendous boom of thunder. She looked out the window and shuddered. "I'm going to get some water," Shining Armour said. "Ok," Candance replied, and looked back at her book. Shining left the room leaving Candance alone. Another boom of thunder sounded, and lightning lit up the room. She happened to look up at that moment and saw the shadow of the most horrifying thing she had ever seen. She slowly turned around to see what looked to be half pony and half dragon looking in at her through the window. It grinned when it saw her looking at it. Candance dropped her book and ran to the bedroom door. She opened it and ran out just as she heard the window break. Candance galloped down the hall knowing the 'thing' was behind her. Turning she began running down the stairs, but then the thing grabbed her and pulled her back to it. She lifted a nearby vase and used her magic to throw it at the beast. It let out a growl, and loosened its grip for a split second. That was all Candance needed. She sprinted down the stairs and then down the second flight of stairs. But the thing was on her again. "Noo!" Candance cried as she was engulfed by the creature. It lifted her up off the ground, and carried her up to the ceiling and out the main window. The last thing she saw before the beast broke it and carried her out was Shining Armour turning the corner and seeing her being carried off. Candance screamed all the way it carried her, until they were out of view of the castle. In Canterlot The guard galloped through the hallway and up the stairs. He knew he had to get tell Princess Celestia about what happened as soon as possible. He passed several other servants who were going about their daily chores, and finally arrived at the Princesses room. He knocked, and waited for her to reply. When the door finally opened, the guard rushed in. "What is it Cloud Tumble?" Princess Celestia asked. "It's Princess Candance." He paused and took a deep breath. "She's gone missing!" Celestia's eyes widened. Then she quickly gave him orders: "Go alert the rest of the Royal Guard and lead a search party for her starting in the Crystal Empire. Also search all the surrounding cities." "Yes, Princess," Cloud Tumble replied. He rushed out of the room, leaving Celestia to pick up a quill and start a letter.

Looking at the first song I don't want to do this anymore...Let me re-shuffle haha This is my Biome! You took my hand, you showed me how. They're still black marks on that county road. I'm feeling like a star you can't stop my shine! Once upon a time. This is not part of the song Im hearing a fucking tornado siren outside gtg

Zac Brown Band Caveman Films Katy Perry Jason Derulo Minecraft Mix Wow, ok...

9

Hmm... Well I'm forced to guess ur age now so...18?

I would watch Mlp:fim

Why the hell couldn't you have given me $6 frickin bucks?! You suck!

Uhh...the above person didn't post any songs...sooo... You Thought I Used Xray By Minecraft Mix. (Oh god) E.T. by Katy Perry. In my defense I got this song a long time ago! Just Can't Get Enough by The Black Eyed Peas. Revenge (Minecraft Creeper Song) by Captain Sparkelz. Blow by Ke$ha

This could be about %20 cooler...

15? Please quote my comment, whoever the next person is. I want to know how old they think I am. They'll never guess!!!

Sup man. No fun on my watch. Trololo!

Sugar Cube. Come on, Seaweed is having two cups of beer, who do you think is going to win?!

Then Trixie came and rescued the clopper.