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You should add a hint of gray to the white mane. The rest of the color palette looks fine. The eyepatch and the cape seems very out of place. It's mostly because of the color. Pure black doesn't really go well with anything. These are just small suggestion but maybe he could have symbols on his eyepatch so it wouldn't look too generic. His cape could have two colors. For example red in one side and black in the other side. 

Overall: 6.3 out of 10

 

And this is going to be my last review for today! Good night guys!

everyone seems to assume its a cape its not a cape its a black robe like the ones spell casters use... just without the hood


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Oh, yes please! :D Grape's a sheep, like 13 in human years.

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Grape

 

I'm gonna be honest I don't how to judge a sheep,  but I'm gonna try my best. The color palette is decent. But why is his eyes white I'm guessing that's just the art style . He have this mischievous 

 looks to him which I kind of like. He also looks pretty cute. The tail looks accurate for a sheep. The hair style looks nice. 

Overall 7.5 out of 10

Oh yus.

The link in my siggy is of my newest and main OC pony, Double Espresso.

Since I had trouble finding a good color scheme and stuck with a basic yellow brown color palette(i don't care) :|

Double Espresso

I would say this a great color scheme! I don't see anything wrong with it. The cutie marks looks simple which is a good thing some people make their cutie mark way too complicated. The mane and tail style match. I honestly don't see anything wrong with this oc.

Overall 9 out of 10

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This looks cool, I'd love it if you could review the design of any of the OCs in my signature!  Keep in mind that I have recently redone Wildscar's design, so it might not be worth reviewing her old one... :)

I might just add, I've noticed that colours come up differently on my laptop screen, so I don't think they'll quite look to same to you as they do to me..

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Other OCs: Dice Venom, Wildscar, Cocoa Pod, Elixir

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Eh, why not? I'm always open to constructive criticism; when it comes to vectors, I'm not the most knowledgeable.

 

I have three OCs with art on this site (links in signature). Have at it!

Compass Meridian

 

I'm not a fan of the black hair. Pony just aren't suited for black hair but, if this is a pony that's based on you and you actually have black hair I guess it's fine.I still recommend changing the hair color tho. The brown coat and the brown eyes doesn't really work. I recommend you use a different eye color. I recommend something like this #163950. His cutie marks is very unique so kudos to you! 

Overall 6.5 out of 10 Minor changes should bump it up to a 7

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Compass Meridian

 

I'm not a fan of the black hair. Pony just aren't suited for black hair but, if this is a pony that's based on you and you actually have black hair I guess it's fine.I still recommend changing the hair color tho. The brown coat and the brown eyes doesn't really work. I recommend you use a different eye color. I recommend something like this #163950. His cutie marks is very unique so kudos to you! 

Overall 6.5 out of 10 Minor changes should bump it up to a 7

 

Thanks; and yes, he is based on me, hence why I chose the black hair. I could see what the problem is, so his hair could be "lightened up" a bit.

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This should be interesting. How does mine look?

 

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Ughhhh I hope my oc's get reviewed unlike in the last two or three threads >:(

http://i.imgur.com/TQsWxAM.png

http://i.imgur.com/I2gsMj0.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/ZytvgdZ.jpg

 

http://i.imgur.com/TVL5GWKh.jpg

 

http://i.imgur.com/bfky3R3l.jpg

 

And this is Leopold http://i.imgur.com/ztauVU4l.jpg

 

I changed the blue maned pony's cutie mark to a chair and whip from the collar and bone, but Idk which suits her more.

 

 

And this is sage leaf

 

http://i.imgur.com/KoiYNqz.jpg

 

http://i.imgur.com/r1WJXJy.jpg

 

Um here ^.^ you go, I hope you like them ><

 

Sorry, had to fix one of the links.


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Agh, why not.

She's in progress, and her personality is still being discovered, but her name is Dark Descant.

That pic is still being shaded (and the wings are being perfected), but the main color scheme, mane/tail styles, and original cutie mark idea are still there.

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This is your average, everyday annoying signature.

Are you seriously reading this?

Really?

Wow. I didn't think you'd actually waste enough time to get to the fourth line.

Or the fifth, for that matter. What, am I interesting or something?

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