Rainbow Dash

[HayaMika 21]

My first time doodling a pony that wasnt being drawn on the screen of a DSi. XD Sorry if it looks kinda weird, seeing as this is my first time drawind full body too.

 

I love constructive critisism! Anything to help me get better~ >w<

 

((PS: You might want to Right Click+View Image this if possible. There are some white outlines and white bubbles that can't be seen on the white background of the fourm... ;w; If not, here is the deviantart link!))

 

((Edit: Since people wanted a grin on her, I went in and attempted to add one. ouo ))

Edited January 15, 2013 by HayaMika

[Courageous Thunder Dash 7,825]

That looks soo awesome! But, I woud like it even better if it had a facial expression. It looks like it's missing something with a smile or a neutral expression. 

[HayaMika 21]

I tried to add an expression but it didnt look right to me. Its kind of one of those some like it, some dont type of things. XD If I can add a facial expression that looks good at some point, I will. :3

Edited January 15, 2013 by HayaMika

[~Lawful Sturdy Wing~ 522]

Absolutely adorable, I love it. The shading is incredible and the edges so smooth, 10/10, the only thing you need to add is a grin, she needs a grin...

[The Leafeon Pinkeh 3,603]

It's great! As for constructive critisism... the man looks a little dark. I think it might look better if it was lighter. But hey, I'm not an artist so... yeah. Good job!!

[Lightning Dasher 149]

As long as she didn't have to eat to survive, everything else about that is good.

Then again, as much as I love Rainbow Dash. Not having to listen to her brag about how awesome she was in certain situations would make things much more tolerant.

[HayaMika 21]

Absolutely adorable, I love it. The shading is incredible and the edges so smooth, 10/10, the only thing you need to add is a grin, she needs a grin...

 

 

That looks soo awesome! But, I woud like it even better if it had a facial expression. It looks like it's missing something with a smile or a neutral expression. 

 

Went in and attempted to add a grin. I dont know how good it looks but hopefully it looks better. If it looks odd tell me and I will try to fix it and make it look a bit better. ouo

[Pinkieeeee 2]

Woah. Lol.

I think its AWESOMEEE! Seriously, for one of ur first times that is Ponylicious!

And I Looove RD!

Advice: Maybe brighten up the mane!

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[duidamasterXD 9,627]

That's beautiful! I love the chromatic thing you did with her mane and tail. Really well done . Hats off to you, and thanks for sharing it .

[crazitaco 596]

she's so lovely looking ^^ you really did a wonderful job on that:

i really like her mane. no seriously, i love the detail and the dark fading effect is interesting in a good way.

i also like her sparkly eyes

[Lightning Dasher 149]

The mouth works as far as i'm concerned. I think it's really good the way it is, and that trying to change it too much would take away from what it already has. Therefore, you should make another picture to add to your collection with a different point of view using the same art style perhaps.

It's a very unique RD pic though and suitable otherwise.

[TailsIsNotAlone 3,696]

That is a really nice art style! I love it. Do some more!

I love the texture in her mane and tail and how she stands out from the background. Great job.

[Jokuc 8,174]

That looks amazing! You are a very good artist, I don't undertsand how this could be drawn on a DSi!

I am so stupid.

 

But good job, I'd love to see more of your art

Edited January 16, 2013 by Jokuc

[Scootalove 10,692]

AMAZING!

 

A very good work of art for Rainbow Dash. I like the smooth edges, this art is very credible and it is something that RD deserves like everypony does. 10/10

[CrystalRose 636]

This is beautiful. You have a wonderful style, I love what you did with the lines. I'd really love to see more from you! Such lovely work!

[Zygen 6,066]

Dang this is really amazing! I really like all the shading you did! Its so unique! And the drawing it itself is very clean and just looks so amazing!

 

Only thing I can complain about is that I feel like the smile needs to show a little better, everything else is just.. Wonderful

 

Great job, I hope to see more soon!

[noplsno 124]

I cant see anything wrong with it to be honest. very good, keep it up! i love the work. would you mind expaining to me what you use and how you go about drawing the body and face. Im a new artist and i need help too

[SongBrony 419]

....That is really cool. Great job on the drawing. It's something I needed after a little hot debate I'm having with someone. This has made me less angry and more happy. Keep up the good artwork!

[HayaMika 21]

That looks amazing! You are a very good artist, I don't undertsand how this could be drawn on a DSi!

 

But good job, I'd love to see more of your art

 

It wasnt done on DSi (If that is what you were thinking.) ouo

 

It was actually drawn using Paint Tool SAI and Photoshop CS2. ouo This was just my first that wasnt on DSi. >w<

 

I'm glad you like it though! ouo

Edited January 16, 2013 by HayaMika

[ProjectRKA 2,848]

For a first-time doodle, this is really, really awesome ! Very nice work there, HayaMika !

I think you should make one of these for all of the mane six ponies :3