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[Ganaram Inukshuk 3,680]

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I feel that the "He said, she said" clogs up everything, and that having the lines of dialogue completely isolated...

 

How about...

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VGf_0w5_4TazAPAS24KdrbQ6na1afkgYVg7A9kIp1sA/edit

 

Besides, that's not the first thing I've tried to write.

Edited July 12, 2013 by Derpy Cowbell

[DiscordAnarchy 770]

I feel that the "He said, she said" clogs up everything, and that having the lines of dialogue completely isolated...

 

How about...

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VGf_0w5_4TazAPAS24KdrbQ6na1afkgYVg7A9kIp1sA/edit

 

Besides, that's not the first thing I've tried to write.

 

You do have talent. I can see it, but for publishers will be very sketchy when it comes to your >> style. I can read it fine. You have some run-on sentence issues as well. Also, I am not sure if this is your intention but it reads as if someone is telling a story. Is this your intent?

[Delzepp 2,939]

[Ihei 711]

Cute. :3

[Haven Celestii 9,385]

 

Cute. :3

Now, why would you something so vulgar?

Poor fluttershy being exposed like that.

[Ihei 711]

@,

 

I wasn't thinking of it that way! I swear, I just thought the squee was cute! 

[Moon Rat 4,772]

Haven, quit scaring little fillies

 

@,

 

I wasn't thinking of it that way! I swear, I just thought the squee was cute!

Lol, don't worry.

Haven is just being Haven(tier)

 

 

 

So, how do you like me now is everyone doing at this time of day

[Delzepp 2,939]

 

open spoiler to see the expression that is obviously missing from the list above

 

 

 

[Haven Celestii 9,385]

@,

 

I wasn't thinking of it that way! I swear, I just thought the squee was cute! 

Mhmm. That's what they all say.

 

Haven, quit scaring little fillies

But I caught her red handed trying to expose poor little Flutters!

 

Lol, don't worry.

Haven is just being Haven(tier) [ ]

Haven, quit scaring little fillies

Stop ruining my fun! :l

 

 

And Im ok.

[Moon Rat 4,772]

But I caught her red handed trying to expose poor little Flutters!

Mhmm. That's what they all say.

 

 

Repost because fuck you <3

 

Stop ruining my fun! :l

AND WHAT ABOUT MY FUN D:

I have fun ruining other peoplezes fun

 

And Im ok.

Good

[Haven Celestii 9,385]

Mhmm. That's what they all say.

 

 

 

Repost because fuck you <3

BUT THAT ISNT WHAT THEY ALL SAY! D:

 

NO ONE ELSE SAYS THAT!

 

 

AND WHAT ABOUT MY FUN D:

I have fun ruining other peoplezes fun

Fak your fun.

 

Good.

I might get on BL2 today. Idk.

[Moon Rat 4,772]

BUT THAT ISNT WHAT THEY ALL SAY! D:

 

NO ONE ELSE SAYS THAT!

 

Fak your fun.

No, fak u~

 

I might get on BL2 today. Idk.

I might not...

My dad will more than likely take over the Xbox because weekend...

 

Idunno, we'll see...

[Delzepp 2,939]

the worst thing in existence:

 

[Moon Rat 4,772]

Ignore this...

I am really bad at mobile quoting -_-

Edited July 12, 2013 by Wuvable ♥ Woona

[Shiki 5,854]

sneep

 

open spoiler to see the expression that is obviously missing from the list above

Irritated/Serious Fluttershy is perfect.

[Moon Rat 4,772]

the worst thing in existence:

 

Not sure if CherryJack (miscolored AppleJack or long lost sister) or badly made Big Macintosh... Edited July 12, 2013 by Wuvable ♥ Woona

[Delzepp 2,939]

Irritated/Serious Fluttershy is perfect.

 

right X3 but also the one to her right, the feminine one, that's all kinds of awesome

 

Not sure if CherryJack (miscolored AppleJack or long lost sister) or badly made Big Macintosh...

not sure if pony or hippo

[Shiki 5,854]

right X3 but also the one to her right, the feminine one, that's all kinds of awesome

 

not sure if pony or hippo

Feminine Rarity would be better.

[Delzepp 2,939]

Feminine Rarity would be better.

wish granted

 

[Ganaram Inukshuk 3,680]

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Well, it won't matter much since that's probably the last story I'm ever gonna write, and the only story that I ever completed.

[Moon Rat 4,772]

right X3 but also the one to her right, the feminine one, that's all kinds of awesome

 

not sure if pony or hippo

that's even better xD

[DiscordAnarchy 770]

Well, it won't matter much since that's probably the last story I'm ever gonna write, and the only story that I ever completed.

 

 

Why?

[Ganaram Inukshuk 3,680]

Why?

 

That story was about myself.

[Delzepp 2,939]

[DiscordAnarchy 770]

Ah. I see. Well, it is still well written.