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38 minutes ago, Moondancer is best said:

Name: fedvin twilight midnight

Age:  teen

Gender: Male

Species: Alicorn(Equestria), Trainpony(Trains Empire)

Cutie-Mark: Somerset and Dorset joint

The story about my oc: Fedvin twilight midnight is the alicorn in train empire from south dorest

He also the son of midnight sparkle

 

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Nice-looking OC BTW ^^


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Name: Matraxial Artemis 

Age: Young Adult

Gender: Male

Species: Unicorn(Equestria), Unknown

Cutie Mark: A Protected Sun, Moon, and Earth with the Three Dark stars

Special Talent: Unknown

Timeline: Season 1 to Season 9, and Equestria Girls

Personality: A Generous, Kind, Honest Unicorn. But some of the times he’s serious of protecting and fighting on any pony. When it comes to protecting his cutie mark change into a sun and earth and his personality change to High Hope, Leadership, And Protective, When it comes to Fighting, Cutie Mark change into Moon and it’s personality change to silent dark and intimidation and the Three dark stars, but when his not protecting and fighting his cutie mark combines to return to his Generous, Kind, and Honest unicorn 

Backstory: Unknown

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Name: Lucky Bolt 

Age: 17 (teenager)

Gender: Female 

Species: Pegasus

Appearence: Lucky has a sky-blue/cyan body, with a yellow and light brown mane and tail, and green eyes. Her appearance is somewhat based off of my appearance irl. 

Cutie mark: A silver horseshoe and yellow lightning bolt, I have a picture of it but I'm just too lazy right now. :P

Personality: Lucky's personality is also an exact copy of mine irl. She's very social, fun-loving, enthusiastic, and always up for anything. She can be very stubborn and impatient at times, but she's also deeply loyal and will always be there for those she really loves. She's also very generous, and enjoys helping others. She's also a country pony at heart and speaks with a slight southern accent.

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2 minutes ago, Lucky Bolt said:

Name: Lucky Bolt 

Age: 17 (teenager)

Gender: Female 

Species: Pegasus

Appearence: Lucky has a sky-blue/cyan body, with a yellow and light brown mane and tail, and green eyes. Her appearance is somewhat based off of my appearance irl. 

Cutie mark: A silver horseshoe and yellow lightning bolt, I have a picture of it but I'm just too lazy right now. :P

Personality: Lucky's personality is also an exact copy of mine irl. She's very social, fun-loving, enthusiastic, and always up for anything. She can be very stubborn and impatient at times, but she's also deeply loyal and will always be there for those she really loves. She's also very generous, and enjoys helping others. 

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Great OC

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Name: Messy Mane (alias "Scruffy")

Age: 15...ish

Gender: Male

Species: Earth Pony 

Appearence: Messy Mane's appearance is supposed to represent me.He has a Light Brown/Tan Body,Black Messy hair and tail,big dark brown eyes,skinny tall body,on some occasions he can be seen with a black pencil thin mustache,beige hooves,and 3 black chin hairs.

Cutie Mark: None

Personality: Messy Mane is a Friendly but shy,quiet,artistic,lonely,and hard working pony.

Backstory: Nothing much,Messy Mane is just a Runaway lonely drifter musician, who travels all around Equestria playing guitar on the streets hoping to meet new friends,spread joy and enjoy this thing called "Life".

Here's a drawing I made of him:

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2 minutes ago, Messy Mane said:

Name: Messy Mane (alias "Scruffy")

Age: 15...ish

Gender: Male

Species: Earth Pony 

Appearence: Messy Mane's appearance is supposed to represent me.He has a Light Brown/Tan Body,Black Messy hair and tail,big dark brown eyes,skinny tall body,on some occasions he can be seen with a black pencil thin mustache,beige hooves,and 3 black chin hairs.

Cutie Mark: None

Personality: Messy Mane is a Friendly but shy,quiet,artistic,lonely,and hard working pony.

Backstory: Nothing much,Messy Mane is just a Runaway lonely drifter musician, who travels all around Equestria playing guitar on the streets hoping to meet new friends,spread joy and enjoy this thing called "Life".

Here's a drawing I made of him:

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awesome OC

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1 hour ago, Sherbert said:

awesome OC

Thank you.you're the second person who has ever told me that ever since I joined the fandom.

Thought it would be cool to make an OC of something not many people would want to be,which is a drifter/hobo lol


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(I have never posted any of my OCs here)

Anyway, introducing my main OC:

  • Name: Nightfall Gloam
  • Race: Unicorn
  • Age: 22
  • Gender: Male
  • Appearance: Dark blue coat, darker blue hoof tips (not sure if there is a name for those :P), short, spiky tail and a curved mohawk mane.
  • Cutie Mark: Three white, six-pointed stars forming a triangular shape
  • Personality: Fun loving, humorous, pays strong attention to detail, may worry about things or get impatient, 
  • Hobbies: Film making, animation, technology, reading, writing, gaming

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I still have yet to come up with a backstory for him, aside from the fact that he was born to a wealthy family from Canterlot. I will edit this post once I come up with a full backstory.

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I created him for this RP power ranger mlp

Name: Ivory Gust 

Species: Longma (half pony and half dragon)

Gender: Male

Personality:  Logical, observant, calm, insightful, and have a little sociopathic side to him.

Ability:Using his wings to create powerful wind strong enough to cut.  

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On 4/11/2018 at 7:57 PM, Venomous said:

@SkyDive

There is already a mega thread in existance regarding the same topic located within Sugarcube Corner. Therefore, I will be merging your thread with that one.

Thank you.

Alright, thanks. I hadn't realized there was already one.

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On 4/7/2018 at 10:56 PM, Matraxial Artemis said:

Name: Matraxial Artemis 

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Species: Unicorn(Equestria), Nexolius(Nexolian)

Cutie Mark: A Protected Sun, Moon, and Earth with the Three Dark stars

Special Talent: Discovering, Learning, and Protection

Timeline: Season 1 to Season 9, and Equestria Girls

Personality: A Generous, Kind, Honest Unicorn. But some of the times he’s serious of protecting and fighting on any pony. When it comes to protecting his cutie mark change into a sun and earth and his personality change to High Hope, Leadership, And Protective, When it comes to Fighting, Cutie Mark change into Moon and it’s personality change to silent dark and intimidation and the Three dark stars, but when his not protecting and fighting his cutie mark combines to return to his Generous, Kind, and Honest unicorn 

Backstory: He was born in the kingdom called Nexolian the most sacred and not heard of kingdom. cause the kingdom is a secret but he was the prince of the Nexolian. In his 17th Birthday everyone/everypony was gather around to listen to the king's word as Matraxial  goes to his Father Solaris Eclipse the king of Nexolian he told Matraxial that he's going to be king of Nexolian after his 18th birthday, But suddenly one of the pony wearing a dark black robe shoots a dark magic beam at the king Solaris Eclipse right through his chest right front of everyone/everypony. Matraxial was traumatize what happen to his father and the assassin took off it's robe swiftly and reveal it's identity. Matraxial was filled anger and rage and hatred to the pony that assassinated his father right in front of him but the pony introduce itself. His name was Disastrous leader of the Sendos destroyer of the CelestialsMatraxial ignites his horn furiously but suddenly his mother Vexolias Matrix and her guards rush front of MatraxialThe guards attacked Disastrous directly but Disastrous defeat the guards with one strong, swift kick Vexolias realise that she couldn't beat Disastrous so she told Matraxial to run as fast as you can but Matraxial refuses what his mother have told him I don't wanna lose you too Mom " he said, Vexolias understands what her son said she tears up slowly and she hug his son tightly. Disastrous ignites his horn and charges Vexolias uses her magic to teleport Matraxial to a place where somewhere is safe from Nexolian as Disastrous charged his horn he shoots a dark powerful beam at Vexolias as Matraxial teleports. Matraxial cried as his mother cried right in front of him. The dark powerful beam pierced her chest and falls down on the floor and the teleportation spell was still active, Disastrous saw Matraxial and Matraxial was speechless and traumatize by his mother killed right front of his eyes Disastrous rushes towards to Matraxial but in that mere moment his mother shoots a beam that hits Disastrous left eye. Disastrous he put his hoove on his left eye as he screamed in pain Vexolias used all of her strength to stop Disastrous from killing Matraxial. Vexolias said to Matraxial " My....son.... I...love....you..... " with her dying words  Matraxiall saw his mother died right in front of him he cries as he teleported to EquestriaDisastrous was furious when Matraxial teleport away from Nexolian he goes to to the throne and pushes King Solaris Eclipse dead body away from the throne and he sat down. All of the ponies of Nexolian we're terrified and Disastrous and his Soldiers occupied Nexolian 

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Name: undecided

age: 17

type: unicorn

Sex: stallion

Colour(me trying to be fancy): Sapphire blue

Eye colour: emerald green

Personality: clumsy, introvert, very scared all the time, generally tired, opposite of confident.

Cutie mark: blank flank (for now aka can’t think of one yet)

hobbies: sleeping, playing drums, singing (when no pony is around), thinking about fluttershy, playing games, not competing in any type of sport, trying to talk to animals, wishing I could just randomly get gills and live in the ocean.

biography (in first person): age 6; I never trusted anyone. Ever since I was sent to this orphanage I have been afraid to Interact with anypony. Just the thought of talking makes me scared. What if they just randomly hate me. The only thing that keeps me waking up in the morning is the thought of meeting the most amazing pony ever. She’s so beautiful but I’m 189.7 quadrillion light years our of her league. She could have anypony she wanted.

Age 9; I have realized that I tend to over complicate things quite a lot. Today was my first day interacting with anypony. Soon I wish I could meet fluttershy. So many ponies do a lot for her. Especially when rainbow dash raced those other ponies to help her out. 

Age 15 day 1; this is it... the day I finally get the chance to talk to fluttershy. I’m so scared. What if i say the wrong thing. Or worse... the only reason I’m here is because I wanted to talk to fluttershy and I saw the flyer to become an interviewer. I just hope I don’t screw anything up.

age 15 day 2; well now that I’ve talked to her for the first time I have no idea what happened. All I remember is me saying hi and then blacking out. I think she hates me. I feel so sorry for her. Me just randomly fainting in front of her... now that she’s popular and has saved the world I doubt she would even remember my name...


I found this on deviant art and its cool

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First off, a BIG kudos to @MidnightFire1222 for having drawn the first picture of four of the five characters WITHOUT references. She took my vague ideas and turned them into something beautiful! Amazing stuff! :D

That said, while I have already introduced the crystal pony Jewelflame, I would also like to introduce the griffin Gypsy, hippogriff CometTail, chaneling Zipper, and zebra Zira; these four being part of a privateer crew with Corsair and Trailblazer.

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25 minutes ago, PathfinderCS said:

First off, a BIG kudos to @MidnightFire1222 for having drawn the first picture of four of the five characters WITHOUT references. She took my vague ideas and turned them into something beautiful! Amazing stuff! :D

That said, while I have already introduced the crystal pony Jewelflame, I would also like to introduce the griffin Gypsy, hippogriff CometTail, chaneling Zipper, and zebra Zira; these four being part of a privateer crew with Corsair and Trailblazer.

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You should get those other two you mentioned sometime!

 

And to keep in the spirit of the thread, here's one of mine (also drawn by me)

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Sorta my ponysona. She's called Midnight Fire, cutie mark is what it is there; a drawing pen with fire coming out of the tip. A for some stuff about her as a charactr; she has terrible eyesight, hence the glasses. She loves to draw and does it best late at night. That shirt she's wearing is her favorite.

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Name: Hollow Wing

Age: 23

Species: Changeling

Sex: Male

Color: Black, with teal eyes

Personality: Inquisitive, Stoic, Philosophical, Pragmatic, secretly Lonely

Special Talent: compensates for his seeming inability to experience love or passion by carefully observing how those characteristics are produced and stimulated in non-changelings, then using his acting skills to induce these feelings in as many creatures as possible.

History: Hollow Wing was once your average changeling, frequently stealing love from whatever creature was most convenient by abducting their loved ones, getting his fix and leaving them to pick up the pieces, but one day he had a revelation of sorts that shifted his personal mission. "If love is the most desirable, good, and beneficial thing, and if it can be created when living beings act in a certain way," he reasoned, "then I should work to create as much of it as possible!" 

Thus, Hollow Wing began acting to produce as much love as possible even in cases wherein he did not intend to stick around and feed on the results, operating off of the hypothesis that injecting love into the world will cause a sort of snowball reaction wherein love will beget even more love, and thus there will be more love for him to feed on in the long run. At first, this project was difficult due to the extreme demands on Hollow's acting ability, but over time he found that he was able to spread massive amounts of love around certain areas by impersonating the right ponies/griffons/what have you at the right times after doing a bit of research into their mannerisms.

But even with the ability to create fertile feeding grounds in this manner, Hollow began to feel a strange sense of envy for the creatures that he manipulated and preyed on. He resented the fact that they seemingly had the ability to produce love naturally in endless quantities if exposed to the right stimuli, an ability which Hollow greatly desired for himself but was unable to figure out how to emulate. More and more Hollow's self-esteem diminished as he stopped seeing himself as a natural predator of inferior creatures  and started seeing himself as a parasite so limited that he had to steal what others could easily produce on their own. Increasingly he started trying to shapeshift into completely original beings in order to earn some legitimate love for himself in the manner of non-changelings, but found this impossible due to his lack of experience with real social interactions not based on lies and manipulation. 

Now he grows gradually more disillusioned with both the changeling way of life and the world in general, still trying to spread love everywhere he goes, but no longer sure why he does it. Is he trying to secure a food source, or trying to find a way to become that upon which he feeds? Or is he just trying to make himself feel like something meaningful?

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Name: Rising Dusk

Age: 24

Gender: Stallion

Species: Unicorn

AppearanceRising Dusk has a midnight blue coat with a short sunset yellow mane and longer full tail, that transitions to red at the tips.  Dusk has a toned fit build, evident for a pony that makes sure he's in shape for work and activities.  Not near the bulk of a Royal Guard, but a few inches taller than the Mane 6.  Often he can be found wearing a light gray hoodie with the hood unused unless it is raining or snowing.

Cutie Mark: Dusk's cutie mark is a sunset orange Magatama rising up, the hole showing through his midnight blue coat.  A yellow starburst with white background glow sitting directly under the bulk and in the curve of the Magatama.

Dusk earned his cutie mark when he was a young colt in school.  It started as the usual normal day of school drama, as all the students watched the two class prima donnas, a young filly unicorn and pegasus, bicker for classroom dominance, again.  Not that Dusk paid all that much attention, his attention was always given to the happenings of the city outside the classroom window.  This day, went wrong rather quickly.  The bickering got more heated than normal, emotions flared and before anypony knew it, the filly unicorn's horn flared with magic and struck the filly pegasus with a very harmful hex.  She didn't mean to, of course, she had no control when her emotions got that way.  Panic and fear erupted in the classroom, ponies ran and screamed as the young pegasus riled in pain on the floor.  Dusk could feel the panic and fear start to set in as he watched the scene unfold, normally the very calm and collected colt.  When he watched the pegasus though, he could see something.  A very faint magical weave of energy wrapped around the pegasus.  The hex perhaps?  Like any weave, he could see the strands in a pattern.  Panic started to fade as he started to analyze the weave, a little tug on this strand, a pull on that one and a snip here... Before he knew it, his horn erupted in orange and black energy and zapped to the pegasus.  Just as he had imagined, the weave of magic unraveled and the hex broke!  As the panic and fear faded from the classroom when the filly pegasus slowly came to, Dusk's cutie mark appeared on his flank.

Magic: Evident by the appearance of his cutie mark, Dusk has a unique gift with Dispel and Counter magic.  Removing curses, charms, hexes, jinxes, barriers and enchantments come relatively easy to him.  Rebounding, reflecting, redirecting or outright stopping spells before they go off, depending on the power the other pony or speed of the spell cast, are his expertise.  He has pretty good strength in his telekinesis and energy beam from diligent practice.  Other than that however, he's an average unicorn and wasn't able to excel in other areas.  This puts him in a much more supportive role when put into groups.  Sadly the lack of available training in such areas of magic have led him to learn much of it on his own.  Because of his work, he did manage to learn a hoof full of binding spells.

Dusk's default magic color is orange, but becomes mixed with black wisps when tapping into his Dispel and Counter magic. 

Personality: Quick witted, wise and calm, Dusk often fills the role of mediator among his friends, co-workers and family.  The neutral party that, whether he likes it or not, often finds himself having to get between two arguing or competing parties.  The pony reluctantly picked to be referee for competitions or the bank for bets among his friends and co-workers.  Always ready with a quick one liner or jib to defuse most situations.  Generally well liked and sought after for advice by all who know they won't be judged. Often he is considered quiet, but not out of shyness in more so that he is a great listener rather than talker.  Sometimes it won't even appear he is paying attention, but is quite capable of proving otherwise and respond to what they were talking to him about.  Never the star pony, but instead the great sage that guides the hero.

Backstory: Born in Canterlot, his father a unicorn poet and philosopher by the name Star Echo, and mother a pegasus aerial dancer by the name Soaring Grace, and lastly older twin unicorn sister, by 12 hours, Setting Dawn.  When he was just a foal, his family moved to Manehattan where he was then raised.  After the incident that earned him his cutie mark, a small group started to take interest in the young colt.  Once he graduated from school he was quickly recruited by the cities law enforcement agency.  Placed in a special division that focused on magical crimes and abuse.  Most of his early career was spent de-cursing and disenchanting dangerous magical objects found throughout Equestria and brought to his office.  Some had to be kept contained in the office's vault, as they were just too powerful for even Dusk to get rid of at his current level of magic, or because the Royalty wanted to keep them around, but safe.  On occasion he'd be brought in to help remove harmful magic from pony victims that hospitals couldn't handle. 

After a couple years he managed to move out of the office basement and become a full time investigator.  Taking cases and hitting the city streets wherever magical abuse arises, whether by unicorn or other ponies just using a magical artifacts.  When the case load was low, the agency was more than happy to help other local law enforcement agencies to help in their own cases.  Recently, he's been promoted to extending past Manehattan and take on investigations cases across Equestria when the need arose. 

Rising Dusk has great rapport with his neighborhood.  Often spending his off hours helping the local community, gladly offering his services to the yearly stage play performed in his neighborhood.  Him and another unicorn providing the special effects on stage by having Dusk rebound the other's spells for some dazzling sights, or grabbing the other's energy beam and bending it around into a dance of lights.

Hobbies: Reading, pony watching and like every self-respecting Manehattan pony, attending the theater!

Voice: I envision Rising Dusk to have a voice similar to Liam O'Brien's.  If you don't know who that is, he voiced Gaara from dubbed Naruto, War from the Darksiders series and Dr. Strange from most the modern Marvel cartoons.

 

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13 hours ago, Rising Dusk said:

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Name: Rising Dusk

Age: 24

Gender: Stallion

Species: Unicorn

AppearanceRising Dusk has a midnight blue coat with a short sunset yellow mane and longer full tail, that transitions to red at the tips.  Dusk has a toned fit build, evident for a pony that makes sure he's in shape for work and activities.  Not near the bulk of a Royal Guard, but a few inches taller than the Mane 6.  Often he can be found wearing a light gray hoodie with the hood unused unless it is raining or snowing.

Cutie Mark: Dusk's cutie mark is a sunset orange Magatama rising up, the hole showing through his midnight blue coat.  A yellow starburst with white background glow sitting directly under the bulk and in the curve of the Magatama.

Dusk earned his cutie mark when he was a young colt in school.  It started as the usual normal day of school drama, as all the students watched the two class prima donnas, a young filly unicorn and pegasus, bicker for classroom dominance, again.  Not that Dusk paid all that much attention, his attention was always given to the happenings of the city outside the classroom window.  This day, went wrong rather quickly.  The bickering got more heated than normal, emotions flared and before anypony knew it, the filly unicorn's horn flared with magic and struck the filly pegasus with a very harmful hex.  She didn't mean to, of course, she had no control when her emotions got that way.  Panic and fear erupted in the classroom, ponies ran and screamed as the young pegasus riled in pain on the floor.  Dusk could feel the panic and fear start to set in as he watched the scene unfold, normally the very calm and collected colt.  When he watched the pegasus though, he could see something.  A very faint magical weave of energy wrapped around the pegasus.  The hex perhaps?  Like any weave, he could see the strands in a pattern.  Panic started to fade as he started to analyze the weave, a little tug on this strand, a pull on that one and a snip here... Before he knew it, his horn erupted in orange and black energy and zapped to the pegasus.  Just as he had imagined, the weave of magic unraveled and the hex broke!  As the panic and fear faded from the classroom when the filly pegasus slowly came to, Dusk's cutie mark appeared on his flank.

Magic: Evident by the appearance of his cutie mark, Dusk has a unique gift with Dispel and Counter magic.  Removing curses, charms, hexes, jinxes, barriers and enchantments come relatively easy to him.  Rebounding, reflecting, redirecting or outright stopping spells before they go off, depending on the power the other pony or speed of the spell cast, are his expertise.  He has pretty good strength in his telekinesis and energy beam from diligent practice.  Other than that however, he's an average unicorn and wasn't able to excel in other areas.  This puts him in a much more supportive role when put into groups.  Sadly the lack of available training in such areas of magic have led him to learn much of it on his own.  Because of his work, he did manage to learn a hoof full of binding spells.

Dusk's default magic color is orange, but becomes mixed with black wisps when tapping into his Dispel and Counter magic. 

Personality: Quick witted, wise and calm, Dusk often fills the role of mediator among his friends, co-workers and family.  The neutral party that, whether he likes it or not, often finds himself having to get between two arguing or competing parties.  The pony reluctantly picked to be referee for competitions or the bank for bets among his friends and co-workers.  Always ready with a quick one liner or jib to defuse most situations.  Generally well liked and sought after for advice by all who know they won't be judged. Often he is considered quiet, but not out of shyness in more so that he is a great listener rather than talker.  Sometimes it won't even appear he is paying attention, but is quite capable of proving otherwise and respond to what they were talking to him about.  Never the star pony, but instead the great sage that guides the hero.

Backstory: Born in Canterlot, his father a unicorn poet and philosopher by the name Star Echo, and mother a pegasus aerial dancer by the name Soaring Grace, and lastly older twin unicorn sister, by 12 hours, Setting Dawn.  When he was just a foal, his family moved to Manehattan where he was then raised.  After the incident that earned him his cutie mark, a small group started to take interest in the young colt.  Once he graduated from school he was quickly recruited by the cities law enforcement agency.  Placed in a special division that focused on magical crimes and abuse.  Most of his early career was spent de-cursing and disenchanting dangerous magical objects found throughout Equestria and brought to his office.  Some had to be kept contained in the office's vault, as they were just too powerful for even Dusk to get rid of at his current level of magic, or because the Royalty wanted to keep them around, but safe.  On occasion he'd be brought in to help remove harmful magic from pony victims that hospitals couldn't handle. 

After a couple years he managed to move out of the office basement and become a full time investigator.  Taking cases and hitting the city streets wherever magical abuse arises, whether by unicorn or other ponies just using a magical artifacts.  When the case load was low, the agency was more than happy to help other local law enforcement agencies to help in their own cases.  Recently, he's been promoted to extending past Manehattan and take on investigations cases across Equestria when the need arose. 

Rising Dusk has great rapport with his neighborhood.  Often spending his off hours helping the local community, gladly offering his services to the yearly stage play performed in his neighborhood.  Him and another unicorn providing the special effects on stage by having Dusk rebound the other's spells for some dazzling sights, or grabbing the other's energy beam and bending it around into a dance of lights.

Hobbies: Reading, pony watching and like every self-respecting Manehattan pony, attending the theater!

Voice: I envision Rising Dusk to have a voice similar to Liam O'Brien's.  If you don't know who that is, he voiced Gaara from dubbed Naruto, War from the Darksiders series and Dr. Strange from most the modern Marvel cartoons.

So in-depth! Even image reference! I love it when someone goes into extreme detail about their OC. I would, but I have such a hard time describing, well, anything. 10/10 by far!

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I have not drawn him yet,but I’ll post it anyways!

King Spartacus

King of Sparterriah

is a Warlord over 5000 years old,still looks good too!

has conquered major areas of uncharted cities is Eqeustria

Known as a hero,but also as a tyrant.(Celestia....)

Has mastered dark magic,philosophy,manipulation,      Mind games,archeology,time manipulation.

His appearance is a male alicorn,black Mohawk,skin is tan,has dark brown eyes,has a straight horn,normal wings,and wears a necklace that contains the “Element of Power”,wears dark gold spartan armor,and has a worn maroon cape. And carries a Greatsword.

his cutie mark shows a Greatsword crossed with a scroll,symbolizing that he has fought in Great Wars,and has mastered other various arts involving paper.

he is a chill dude but also very serious,and has anger issues. He onced opened the Element of Powers case once,but then he turned into his alter ego,Emperor Wartrocitus! War-tros-i-tis.                 And similar to Luna, he was banished to an unknown desert planet.

Emperor Wartrocitus appearance

His eyes turn purple,his skin turns black,his wings transform into dragon wings,grows sharp teeth,horn gets jagged,tail and hair turn into a purple aura looking thing(imagine Luna’s hair,but purple,and more mohawkish)

also is mentally insane in this form,has similarities to the Joker and carnage,and makes bad puns,and talks like a MANEiac.

did you get that? No? You know MANE? Maniac? Oh nevermind...

anyways that’s mine 

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A few years ago, I started planning out an idea for an OC.  I did make a picture of it, but it's beyond cringy by today's standards.  I'm a lot better at crafting stories and going from there.  Also, because of that, I never actually came up with a name for this OC.  I hope I'm not breaking the rules here by using primarily text and no images, but bare with me...

My OC is an alicorn with a severed horn.  It wasn't severed through traditional methods, but rather through black market horn removal surgery as a young colt, a process which is incredibly dangerous and illegal (explained in detail below)

Backstory: I was born in a village in the far west of Equestria, 3 years prior to the Equestrian Expansion.  In this small village, alicorns could be birthed naturally, but it was incredibly rare.  Even then, those that were born were never given any special treatments or praise, nor discriminated because of their gifts; they were treated as regular ponies.  I was there the day that the first scouts arrived in our village.  They were the first batch of explorers, traversing the lands to the West to expand the Equestrian Border.  At first, they were surprised to see a community that didn't know about the legend of the two sisters.  What was more shocking to them was the sight of a young alicorn racing with other pegasi.  The scouts asked about that young Colt, saying things like "That young Colt should be treated like a king."  As a kid, I never understood this.  It was only later that I learned of why they were so shocked.

 

Two months went by after the scouts departed from our village.  We heard nothing from them and just went on our normal day.  Then, one day, a large white alicorn came into town with an army of Royal Guards.  She told us that we were now a part of the nation of Equestria.  She gave a great speech about the glory of the country, the unification of the many lands that we have never even heard about.  (OOC: This part is incredibly flimsy.  Logic doesn't make sense here, but just go with me.  Also, tyrantlestia, yes, but it's a two-faced facade.)

That night, two things woke me: my father, and the smell of smoke.  He told me that I needed to run to the back door of our house as two Guards started pounding on the door.  I watched in horror as the two guards pounded down the door of our house and barged in.  I could see other houses being set ablaze, Celestia watching over them with a concerned and tense look on her face.  This wasn't the princess who came to our town, she was a monster with two faces.  I tried asking my dad about what had happened, and he told me that those strangers never came peacefully.  He overheard Celestia talking a couple of hours ago.  She was scared of the alicorns in the village and wanted them eliminated from the village.  The guards knew that this was absurd, even for her, but they let it slide for .  She told them that the cover story would be "We found the village burned to the ground and the villagers slaughtered.  If anyone asks about why there are no more alicorns, we just tell them that we'd have to build a castle for each and every one of them, we don't have the resources for that"  The guards went door to door and rounded up the alicorns, telling the parents that they're going to be taken to Celestia's princess training academy with other alicorns.  Of course, nobody agreed to this and they were killed on sight.  Those who didn't have an alicorn were told that they could live if they spoke nothing about this.  My dad knew that this was coming and tried to rally up a resistance, but in vain.  My mother lead the charge as a diversion.  She's presumed dead.

My father took me into hiding for a year, helping to teach me how to do remedial tasks without the use of magic.  "Normally, they tell you to be proud of your heritage.  This is one of those instances where we aren't proud of it."  My father got the two of us back into equestrian territory easily.  Once back in, we chose to lay low in a small town called "Ponyville."  My father looked into the black market business underneath Ponyville, and met Gallus Amputee, a black market surgeon who specialized in horn and wing removal.  We paid Gallus everything we could (I couldn't get a job because I was still a kid, and my dad couldn't get one because he didn't want to risk things), which under normal circumstances wasn't enough.  They were still willing to do it.

That night, my dad told me that everything's going to be okay and left me with Gallus, presumably to get the day-old-bread from the bakery.  Gallus put me under and performed the surgery.  When it was done, there was a little stubble of a horn left, and Gallus cast two illegal spells: one which prevents horn growth, and another that prevents magic usage.  When I came to, my dad was looking at me.  I had blood pouring down from where my horn used to be, but he told me that it'll be fine.  Before he left for his usual bread run, he gave me his hat and told me  "Always hold onto that hat.  When you do, you know that your mother and I will always be there with you."  (This is about as far as I got, mostly going off of memory alone.)

Age: 15

Occupation: None.  Technically, he's a vagabond

Cutie Mark: Comedy/Tragedy mask

Personality: Shy, but not by choice.

Any help would be very much appreciated, and if a mod tells me to tone it down, it's all fine and good.

 

 

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