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  1. Strawberry Tart
    I think I'll critique this, if you don't mind, sir/ma'am. The Bad: Derpy's head doesn't look like a MLP pony head. It needs to be more circular and round, and her nose needs to be shorter. The grass needs to be one style. Either you make all of it blades of grass (like the top), or you make all of it one solid color like you did on the bottom. The top of the mane is a bit too large. The ears are too long. The body is off: the neck is thick, then the rest of the body gets thinner as it moves towards the flank. Derpy could do with some shading here and there, though it doesn't really matter, because some people just can't shade/are too lazy to. The Good: I like her mane. Seriously. Although it's big towards the front, it's nicely shaded and ruffled, like Derpy's. You've got her expression correct. She looks very concentrated on the muffin. Nicely done. The shading on the clouds is detailed and perfect. Her legs are good: not too thick and not too thin! The wing is just like in the show! The grass has a lot of detail, which makes it look more realistic.
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    Make it your avatar. Somehow, not sure how, but... DO IT. I ORDER YOU. That is really cute art, by the way, Motion Spark. Very cute. But the head is a bit large and the neck is a bit long.
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    These are wonderful. I'm going to critique them. The Good: You've got Rarity's mane/tail down to an art (the curls and color are correct) You have your own style The shading is done correctly The eyes are beautiful The ponies are proportional (no large heads or tiny flanks, etc) The colors are correct The Bad: AJ's flank and legs are a bit confusing (why is her flank so edgy? Why does her left back leg look disconnected?) The tops of Celestia's back legs look too skinny Luna looks like she's about to tip over (make her front legs be on the ground more. It's awkward the way you've got it) Sweetie Belle's tail looks like it's one color You forgot the stars in Luna's mane AJ's mane looks floppy (it's very volumous in the show) Overall, very nice work. I'm jealous. Did your sister like them?
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    1. Fluttershy/Pinkie Pie 2. Rarity 3. Rainbow Dash 4. Twilight Sparkle 5. Applejack Pinkie Pie is more of a #1 for me, but Fluttershy is so cute that she had to have 1st place too
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    Believe me, my teacher treats the classroom like Sparta, except she doesn't actually explain anything, then gives us extremely hard tests on music-reading and music theory. Then she yells at the class for failing. Yes you can, I just haven't figured out how. My choir does so much more than just sing: we have to learn music theory and how to read music. Music theory is basically rhythm, Roman numerals, Minor vs major, etc. It's really hard especially since my teacher doesn't even explain that much, then expects us to know everything.
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    Nooooo. It's not a rite of passage, silly. It's what determines which group you fit into: nerd, outcast, in-between, or popular! :3 I fit into the nerd category ^-^ I hate Justin and 1D and the Jonas Brothers (who are soooo 5 years ago, by the way).
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    I hate when people yell at me for calling them "black" or something, then call me white. Okay, so "black" is racist, but "white" isn't? What?
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    Totally. http://productforums.google.com/forum/#!topic/youtube/-xc1WMua3Sk This is one, where while not openly discussed, it's mentioned that Hasbro encourages it. There aren't many websites that discuss it, but if you do find any...just google where you can find episodes that are actually allowed. And hey, maybe they already posted the Apple Family Reunion on wherever you watch it.
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    I'm sure they will upload it soon! If they don't, I suggest looking for another website (Google it!) that has permission to put it up there. You would, though. Hasbro actually encourages people to put episodes on Youtube and other sites, as long as they give credit. I looked it up on several websites.
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    So, in about three weeks I have semester finals. WOOO! I just wanted to know how all of you study for finals/any tests. I usually have a LOT of trouble with studying, and end up winging it, but right now I'm studying my head off (so much for winter "break"). My question is, what are your study methods? Share~ Maybe yours are better than mine, or someone is better than someone else at studying or has good ideas. My study methods are as follows: -For history (AP World), "World History Crash Course" is awesome. I'm currently watching all 40-some episodes, they're really funny and teach a lot. They're on Youtube. -For math I just go in my math book and choose 5 problems to do for each chapter section. -I'm good enough at English that I never need to study. -Not sure what to do for science...? Any ideas? -For Spanish I'll probably get flash cards or the like. -I have no clue what to do for choir, I don't even have ideas... I hope this topic doesn't exist - I looked it up and nothing came up.
  11. Strawberry Tart
    First of all, welcome, precious, and I, in the name of the forums, say: we hope you enjoy your time here. Second of all, what's a consultant artist? Third of all, wise words, precious, but what about the things you're unsure of?
  12. Strawberry Tart
    Haha, you don't need to build up a friendlist unless it makes you uncomfortable not to have all your friends written down! I don't have more than 10 added friends on here, and that doesn't bother me ^-^ But do whatever you like. Just saying that you don't really have to do anything and we won't judge you like on Facebook...
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    Why are you surprised? You're a good artist, especially if this was drawn on a tablet, which it was, right? Of course, the wings could use work, but other than that...
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    Oh, okay, nevermind. I kind of got the vibe that you only drew ponies. ^-^* Nevermind, shows how I was mistaken. I still have a lot of work to do on my chibis....
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    Thank you for the compliment! If the chibi thing doesn't work out for you, I could always draw it...If you want. Your art is adorable, too.
  16. Strawberry Tart
    I want you to draw my OC, too! Image above Please please please please please with a cherry on top? It would be wonderful!! Her cutie mark is a strawberry tartlet. Like you know, a mini strawberry tart. It would be nice if you could do the OC for me. But if no, then that's fine.
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    ...I bet I've beat all of you. -Until a couple months ago I hadn't seen Grease -Until last year I hadn't seen A Christmas Story -I've only seen one and a half of the Griswold Vacation movies -Until last month I'd missed out on Jumanji -I have not seen The Addams Family -I have not seen Napoleon Dynamite -I haven't seen any of the LOTR Trilogy besides The Hobbit -I haven't seen any of The Walking Dead -I have no wish to watch Dr. Who -I've never seen Forrest Gump -I have not seen one superhero movie such as The Avengers or anything like that HOW DARE YOU. HARRY POTTER IS ONE OF THE BEST FANDOMS AND SERIES EVER. THIS IS A CRIME. A CRIME. Strawberry Tart's Scripts: 1. Thou shalt not hate Harry Potter. Lost doesn't seem to get any better, either. My stepsister told me it was AMAZING, so I got through the first season and through half the second, which is where it started to get weird because it seemed like the creators were running out of ideas. Everyone has always told me "Once you start Lost, you don't stop." Well, it's not that good.
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    1. We should all be ponies 2. I'd be a unicorn (like my avvie says) I also like Equestria better, for similar reasons: instead of encouraging everypony to find a job that pays well, they encourage everypony to do what they love and are good at. I think that's the best moral there could ever be. By the way...I just realized: I guess it's settled then. We take over the world and make it as Equestria-like as possible. It would be cool to be able to do that.
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    I doubt they will ever make it possible in any way to tell age. And you know why? Pokemon, that's why. Yes, that's right, Pokemon! Remember Ash? He was ten when he started his journey....which was around 15 years ago. He's still ten and people are frustrated. Hasbro didn't want to do that.
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    I totally agree with everything you just said. Everything. God, it can be annoying sometimes. It would be totally different if they featured someone's OC in the episodes (which they already did, I think...?). Or if they made an episode about Lyra temporarily becoming human. But seriously? G3 references are brony references? Since when?
  21. Strawberry Tart
    Definitely they should do that!! Especially since Generosity, Magic, Honesty, Kindness, Loyalty, and Laughter are not the only elements of friendship. The show should make that clear. That's really cool!! It would totally work. I even have an idea for the episode in which they could be brought in: The 2 crystal ponies could be best friends, and not want to accept another 6 into their group. Or vice versa, mane six not wanting other 2. Plus, for the season finale, Celestia could be all like "Hey Twilight, i didn't tell you about this, but there are two other elements out there that I thought were well hidden but now *insertnameofvillainhere* wants them, and you have to save them, or else Equestria is in danger. Oh, did I mention you have to find the other two ponies that fit with them, too? Have fun!"
  22. Strawberry Tart
    Yes. Those sideburns are to die for, and the purplish-greenish mist is one of the things that would have attracted me to him on a blind date. Not to mention that possibly glowing, red, horn, and the heavy armor. Totally a ladies' man. Oh, and did I mention the "evil lord" part of his personality? It's just so sweet!
  23. Strawberry Tart
    That is so weird. I'm taking an AP history course right now, and my history teacher is crazy, in a good way, though. He's really funny, but he gets off topic a lot (he tells hilarious stories about which the 3 AP classes tell each other, it's fun~). And he gets way into things. But no soda cans X3 Until you mentioned that he had soda cans lying around everywhere, I was actually thinking, "Oh my god what if that's my history teacher..." but a lot of other facts don't fit. So yeah.
  24. Strawberry Tart
    Peppermint hot chocolate~! You just make your favorite hot chocolate (I like Trader Joe's European, because it's not too sweet and makes me feel ~refined~), then put a candy cane in it~! It's really cool because the candy can doubles as a stirrer. Although I've seen candy cane spoons. (Must try!!)
  25. Strawberry Tart
    Then I'll do scene form. It doesn't really matter to me, they're kind of the same except comic form is a more close up of their faces~
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