Lyra iPod Background

[Dusty Soul 2,613]

 

Here's the new one, (seriously these are really fun to do)  It's Lyra's cutie mark, like my last one I wouldn't mind some criticisms to help me improve.

[Ember_star 229]

Hmmm, well the ONLY idea i have is that you could make the lyra stand out a little more, but its really cool, and i dont know anything about these, so all ill say is ITS AMAZING 

[Leafeon 2,702]

I would suggest turning down your opacity on your smoke and other screen layers. Provided your using photoshop, the Lyra gets lost.

 

Looks quite good though.

Edited January 28, 2013 by Firebolt

[Concord 1,982]

Hello!

 

It's nice, it really is. The problem is that, it's not to visible. As Firebolt Suggested, reducing the opacity should help. Good work though!

[Dusty Soul 2,613]

Hmmm, well the ONLY idea i have is that you could make the lyra stand out a little more, but its really cool, and i dont know anything about these, so all ill say is ITS AMAZING 

 

 

I would suggest turning down your opacity on your smoke and other screen layers. Provided your using photoshop, the Lyra gets lost.

 

Looks quite good though.

 

 

Hello!

 

It's nice, it really is. The problem is that, it's not to visible. As Firebolt Suggested, reducing the opacity should help. Good work though!

Thank you!  Yeah, I figured that would be the problem for this one.  I'm glad you told me though.  Thank you for doing that.  I had reduced the opacity a little, but not as much as I probably should'v.

[Admiral Colt 61]

I don't mean to be a grammar nazi to anyone on this forum or anything, but you're all saying lyra as in her name, the instrument is a lyre. Again, sorry it was just bugging me a bit.

[Dusty Soul 2,613]

I don't mean to be a grammar nazi to anyone on this forum or anything, but you're all saying lyra as in her name, the instrument is a lyre. Again, sorry it was just bugging me a bit.

Yeah, though it is her cutie mark.  I know the instrument is a lyre it's supposed to be her, Lyra's cutie mark,  I mean if I put thundercloud for a rainbow dash cutie mark thing it wouldn't make sense.

[Admiral Colt 61]

Yeah, though it is her cutie mark.  I know the instrument is a lyre it's supposed to be her, Lyra's cutie mark,  I mean if I put thundercloud for a rainbow dash cutie mark thing it wouldn't make sense.

No the title is fine, I'm just saying with the comments. They all say lyra, like when saying reduce the opacity to make the "lyra" stand out more. There you would use lyre. The title fits though since it's who's cutie mark it is. I don't really know if I'm making sense anymore lol

[Dusty Soul 2,613]

No the title is fine, I'm just saying with the comments. They all say lyra, like when saying reduce the opacity to make the "lyra" stand out more. There you would use lyre. The title fits though since it's who's cutie mark it is. I don't really know if I'm making sense anymore lol

Oh I see, I didn't know what you were meaning  .  I thought you were meaning the title, because that's what people see first, but I understand.

[TailsIsNotAlone 3,696]

 

Just kidding. xD  Great job, Dusty. If I had an iPod, that would be my background. Did you find that pic of her cutie mark or make it yourself?

[Zygen 6,066]

Looks pretty good I'd say, I agree that the lyre needs to be a bit more visiable, Its a bit to faded in my opinion. Not that it has to be a big standout, but ya know .

 

Great job though

[Lost 1,410]

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Nice work, has a sort of spooky feeling to it IMO

 

Maybe you should make one large thread with your entire collective works in

[Dusty Soul 2,613]

Just kidding. xD  Great job, Dusty. If I had an iPod, that would be my background. Did you find that pic of her cutie mark or make it yourself?

XD Thank you, I actually found it off of Deviantart, if you go to my deviantart that's in my signature then go to the page where this picture is, I gave the link to the creator. (just if you want to use it)

 

Looks pretty good I'd say, I agree that the lyre needs to be a bit more visiable, Its a bit to faded in my opinion. Not that it has to be a big standout, but ya know .

 

Great job though

Yeah, that has been a common complaint  .  Thank you!

 

... Dusty made this thread.. It is now mandatory that I bro hoof and reply!

 

Nice work, has a sort of spooky feeling to it IMO

 

Maybe you should make one large thread with your entire collective works in

XDD Thank you!  I probably should'v done that before now, I will have to do that.  

[Scootalove 10,689]

I'd say less smoke, then maybe we will see Lyra since she is barely visible in the background. But still, a very awesome background.

[Dusty Soul 2,613]

I'd say less smoke, then maybe we will see Lyra since she is barely visible in the background. But still, a very awesome background.

Well may I say, that Lyra isn't in the picture, it's her cutie mark.  I put it on my iPod it shows up a lot better In my opinion.  Thanks a bunch!