I'll judge your OC pony!

[V1RUS_ 85]

So I had this Idea yesterday.

A lot of people here have Ponysonas or OC ponies.

And a lot of them suck.

 

Because of this, Ive decided to set up a thread where I judge pony OCs on their originality, awesomeness, and various other traits.

 

HINT: ^This is exactly what I DO NOT want to see.^

 

The score for your pony will be out of ten.

 

Just post a picture of your OC and a report of their backstory, abilities, personality, etc..

(Quotes are cool as well.)

 

(A link to their page in the archives will work fine.)

 

So without further ado, lets post some pone!!

[Midnight Seeker 302]

http://mlpforums.com/topic/32943-disciples-of-nightmare-moon-my-orginal-characters/

 

Here you go, have six of the little blighters. Midnight Seeker is my OC, but I can't really think of him without his "family".

Enjoy!

[Sir.Flutter Hooves 2,953]

So I had this Idea yesterday.

A lot of people here have Ponysonas or OC ponies.

And a lot of them suck.

 

Because of this, Ive decided to set up a thread where I judge pony OCs on their originality, awesomeness, and various other traits.

 

HINT: ^This is exactly what I DO NOT want to see.^

 

The score for your pony will be out of ten.

 

Just post a picture of your OC and a report of their backstory, abilities, personality, etc..

(Quotes are cool as well.)

 

(A link to their page in the archives will work fine.)

 

So without further ado, lets post some pone!!

Ok, let's do this.

 

Here's my OC Brown Horizon:

 

He is the James Patterson of the pony world. He loves to read and write, he lives with his girlfriend Vivid Kicks, and he has a dog name Bear. His favorite sport is football, and he loves animals.

 

Here is his girlfriend Vivid Kicks:

 

She works at the Equestria Rock Palace. She loves any type of rock  and dubstep. She lives with her boyfriend Brown Horizon, and has loves to garden and such.

 

Please judge to your fullest extent .

 

/)

 

[Fridge 382]

I have two I'd like to hear your opinion on if you don't mind, I'll just put links to them rather than copy paste the whole thing.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/dusk-emerald-r1918

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/scarlet-star-r2707

 

I'd like any feedback I can get as these are two of my main characters in a series I'm working on.

[~Sole~ 852]

usually, its bad to judge somepony. But I'll let it slide... this time.(kidding)

My oc is the second link in my sig, he might not get a high score because his past is a mystery.

[elbj 190]

Well ok then I'd like to get someone else's thoughts on my OC, Justin Time. He's more or less a ponysona of me, too, I guess. 

 

http://mlpforums.com...stin-time-r3199

[Nothing&NoOne 695]

Eh, why not.

 

Princess Ebony Nightingale.

 

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/princess-ebony-nightingale-r680

 

Here's her without the accessories;

 

 

 

 

I was bored in the pony creator one day and that's how she was made, everything else followed suit.

 

Oh, quotes. Nothing that interesting, (and just off the top of my head)

 

"Do lighten up."

 

"No worries."

 

"You don't have to apologize to me, it's ok."

 

"As long as everyone is happy."

 

"Princess Nightingale. Call me Ebony."

Edited May 9, 2013 by Princess Nightingale

[PinkieShyFlutterPie 408]

I have 3 different OC's you could look at. MillyMusic (my first OC, i named her...i'm not to good with names) Neon Strobe and Heather. What do you think about them?  

[Blue Moon 6,341]

Sure, here is a link to my ponysona. His name is Blue Moon.

http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/blue-moon-r2808

 

 

 

He also has a wife and daughter, but I haven't made their profiles yet. So, these are just pictures and I don't want opinions on them. I'm just putting them here for the sake of bio and backstories.

 

 

 

Edited May 10, 2013 by Blue Moon

[Naught Important 434]

 

Name: Satyr Borderick

 

Title: My Ponysona

 

General Personality: Kind, caring, forgiving, and enthusiastic about his hobbies

 

Other Descriptions: Has a relatively deep voice; is very feminine; loves to think about the bigger things; doesn't hold back when loving those who are not his main lover; opposes of sexual intercourse unless a reasonable reason is given to do so; takes most things literally

 

Backstory: Was born on Human Earth under the names of a King and Queen. (DON'T LEAVE YET)

He never really liked anyone he met, since everyone on his world was obnoxious or misguided.

His mother died for reasons that didn't truly dawn on him until later.

His father became outraged and became a ruthless Tyrant, therefore making Satyr like him less

 

Later on, he was forced to marry a prostitute. At the time, she took the role of the princess that he was supposed to marry.

Satyr attempted suicide by running into a forest supposedly inhabited by a serial killer.

Due to his outrage, he actually fell in love with the killer.

 

Much later on, his legal wife stumbled upon him and the killer together and devised a plan to kill the killer.

(This is the part where it can get questionable...)

Since Satyr did actually love the killer, he wished upon a "star" for help.

Since the star wasn't actually a star, rather an alien, he got the help he wanted.

That help being transformed into a supernatural being that could alter physics and nature in many ways.

When he finally realized what he was, he was thrilled beyond belief.

Since the alien still was producing the gas that transformed him into a super natural being, he wanted to give it to the killer so he and her could escaped their planet.

To make sure that it worked still, he tested it on a wasp that he let into his room.

It worked, so he was even more thrilled.

 

On the day when his wife's plan took action, he wiped the battlefield clean of any soldiers that were taking part in this plan.

At this point, he took the killer to the alien and finally realized that the alien wasn't just a meteorite, and they all left for the moon to sort things out.

Once that was done, the alien wanted Satyr to help him with something.

The alien was rejected by his own species on his planet, and he wanted someone else to convince them otherwise.

He thought that Satyr was the perfect candidate.

 

Once they reached the area where the alien's planet was, the alien was shocked to find out that his planet and all other planets in the solar system where gone due to a supernova.

The alien became depressed, since he had worked for a few thousand years to regain respect on his planet.

While this was happening, the ghost of a creature from his planet appeared.

It didn't seem to be causing much trouble, so the ghost, the alien, Satyr, the killer, and the wasp all joined together to make a little group.

An island was built to house each one of them.

The Ghost, however, possessed the island and threw it into the supermassive black hole in the center of the galaxy.

Surprisingly, they all lived through one of the most powerful forces in the known universe.

However, there was one small detail that perplexed each one of them: the killer and Satyr were turned into Ponies. (Eyup)

 

Out of curiosity, Satyr returned to the Earth in the dimension they just entered.

They stumbled upon Equestria; more specifically Ponyville.

(If you want me to continue the story, just ask)

 

Quotes: When he was protecting the killer, Satyr's father was holding a gun up to the killer's head. Before he was able to pull the trigger, Satyr jumped up and redirected the shot. Satyr's father asked what he was doing, and he said: "Keeping a Promise"

 

Motto: "When Life Gives You Lemons, Make Orange Juice"

This basically meant that you are not limited to one solution to a problem.

 

"We come in peace! Honest!"

 

"May I speak with your leader? If you don't mind..."

 

Later on in the story when he meets Applejack, she warns him about making corn circles in her crops. He replies with: "Why would I need to? We've already found this planet..."

 

"Nothing is Impossible!"

 

"Making peace helps during war..."

 

"I never wanted to get to know anyone on human Earth because I already had too many enemies."

 

"Time travel is WAY to dangerous, don't do it kids."

 

 

 

That's basically it. My OC Archive post is in my Signiture, go there for more information...

 

Sorry this post is so long.

 

 

 

[NekromantiaFox 270]

I tried to do a thread like this once, but it got aggressive very quickly (people don't like criticism). It didn't last long.

[~Master~ Button Mash 2,307]

I have two OCs that you can judge. Stratos is my main OC and my personal ponysona. Cirrus is my secondary OC with a more interesting backstory. They're both linked in my sig.

[Love*Potion 575]

Ah this'd be great! Would you mind judging my OC, Kismet? She was my first and original design, and I am very proud of her. I would like to hear a second opinion to make sure I'm not in a daze or something.

 

I am open to any and all critiques. 

 

(KISMET in my signature)

[Azura 1,107]

I think most of us know a lot of OCs aren't that great, especially with those absolutely disgusting colors. The thing is, they made their OC for themselves, not for you.

 

I'm not hating on the thread, but if he tells everypony with bad OCs the sad truth, this isn't gonna be a happy thread.

[Dreadmallon 353]

My (main) OC: New Moon

 

 

   Backstory:

 

   New Moon is a former student of Princess Luna, and is, at first, the main antagonist of the trilogy I am writing. As this is not yet completely thought out, I'd rather not go into too much detail about that.

 

   New Moon's real name is Dusk, and was a skilled thief in his colthood. Eventually, when he was dared to steal from the Royal Castle, he went to prove the other young ponies wrong, but nonetheless was caught by Princess Luna, who then called in Princess Celestia, within the Royal Castle's library (he was also a devote reader, like Twilight, and was distracted by the library). Celestia had previously witnessed him outdo the Royal Guards and get away with an apple cart, and ever since had watched him with interest. Knowing of his interest to improve with magic, she offered him a spot in Canterlot's School for Gifted Unicorns, and in return, to stop his thieving ways. He accepted, and thrived under the school's teachings. Eventually, Celestia, who had noticed his rise within the school, appointed him as an apprentice to Luna, who she thought was ready for a personal student. At first, Luna and Dusk did not get along very well, as Luna saw him as a "lowlife pickpocket," and Dusk had expected as much, as he was commonly referred to as such within the school. However, the two began to bond through their lessons, and eventually became great friends, with Luna taking a "big sister" role.

 

   Unfortunately, though, when Nightmare Moon was unleashed, her dark magic not only changed her from the inside and out, but also her guards and Dusk. Dusk's normally adventurous, kind, cocky nature was transformed into an angry and hateful one (although this doesn't really show, as he either is serious, or will taunt his enemy). Following Nightmare Moon's imprisonment, Dusk was exiled for assisting the Mare in the Moon, and later took the name New Moon. He would later die, but not before implanting his magic, thoughts, etc. into a black, octagon gem. This would be passed around the black market for decades (similar to the Alicorn Amulet; unable to be broken by any whom the gem does not see as "worthy"), until it would come into the hooves of a lowly business stallion by the name of Flick (in current MLP:FiM time) who was low on funds, and had been conned out. The gem took him as worthy, and a new New Moon was born.

 

   That's all I have for now.

 

   Abilities:

• Slight-moderate weather manipulation; mainly storms.
• Telekinesis
• Can transform into a fog cloud, giving him the ability to fly, and be invisible when near a pony
• Skilled with offensive magic
• Expert of stealth
• Teleportation
• Good physical abilities (jumping, running, etc.)
• Intelligent
• Is not as arrogant like previous villains

   Weaknesses:

• If his horn is obstructed in any way, he is practically crippled, as he heavily relies on magic.
• He is completely ethereal when in fog form.
• He can face major fatigue, depending on how much magic he uses.
• Has not mastered defensive spells. Usually will take hits head on, or teleport out of the way.
• He is easily persuaded

    Personality:

 

- Will write tomorrow -

Edited May 9, 2013 by Aodeus

[V1RUS_ 85]

Oh god the replies. 0.0

I'll do my best to judge these as quickly as I can, but don't expect any updates until tomorrow. I'll judge those who posted first.

 

And for those worried about me hurting anyone's fellings, I'm going to be CRITICAL, not an all out jerk.

[Alex Kennedy 1,228]

Eh, why not? I'm not sure why I should care anyway, but if you want to judge my OC, (well, one of my many OCs) here it is. Sadly, the pony creator image, which is the only full body image I have of him (and the only one in color, for that matter), has been missing for a long time.

[Pinkazoid 3,493]

Welp, here's my OC Sugar Rush

(Click the picture of my OC to go to it's character sheet. There you can find it's backstory, personality, and all of that other good crap :3)

Edited May 9, 2013 by Artemis

[Zygen 6,066]

Well my OC's backstory is a bit incomplete since I've yet to do much in that department yet, I do plan on doing it though eventually.

 

Some of the other information is on his character page http://mlpforums.com/page/roleplay-characters/_/zygen-r2969

 

 

As for a picture here ya go. 

I guess I have nothing to lose from hearing your opinions .

Edited May 9, 2013 by Zygen

[dedacct6 2,591]

Here's my OC, his name is Pelate Overcast, i worked hard on making him so I hope ya like it

Colors:Pelt:white, Hair:black with a red stripe, eyes: Amber

 

Personality: Serious, Sarcastic, Creative, when he puts his mind to something he does great

 

Backstory: Born in cloudsdale, as a normal Pegasus, he attended flight school like the others, but he dropped out because he didn't care, and so he moved to ponyville, alone... he never did what every pony else did, and didnt do great in school, but still tryd, and passed 8th grade with a moderate grade, hes now a 15 year old and in high school, still not very good at flying and he decides to stick with drawing, and hes given a hard time because he cant fly well, and he still just lives like a normal teen, but he is just bottling up all of his negative emotions, and anger...

 

Dislikes: Repetitive ponies, Media, bad puns, and recklessness

 

hope you like my OC

Edited May 9, 2013 by Pelate077

[V1RUS_ 85]

I literally had an over 2500 character long review nearly finished for you, but my computer refreshed the page and I lost everything. Autosave, my ass.

 

Midnight Seeker

I like his design, the horns look cool, and his dark coat matches his brown mane and tail well. His personality would serve the hero of a story well, and his backstory is cool and fresh.

 

8/10-

 

 

Sunset Dreamer

A little hard to look at because of the way her mane's colors clash, but the wings and reptile eyes, along with the horns give her a cool evil look. Her backstory is cool, the way you explained that her anger is a mask was a nice touch, but I feel as if her conflict with Seeker was resolved too easily, I kinda would have liked to have a seem some conflict. (I just like drama and battles.)

 

7/10-

 

 

 

 

 

 

Vortex

Wow. I actually quite like this one. The strange design on his coat reflects his insanity well, as do his out of control mane and tail. The boots and armbands look crazy as well. The fact that he doesn't have a past makes him seem a little rushed, but I liked to ways you went into detail about his madness.

 

 

8/10- 

 

 

 

Mother Eldrich

I really like this one. Her design is nice, she looks quite powerful, like she should be in charge. The fact that she made her wings for herself kind of Gives her more depth than most alicorn OCs. Her colors all look nice together, so everything checks out okay design-wise. Her personality is believable. If she was used in a fanfic, she'd feel like a real person, I know it.

 

 

9/10-(Didn't think I'd be giving many of these out in this thread. )

 

 

Count Toxin

This is probably my least favourite one, mostly because if his design. It's not that I don't like him, because I do. Its mostly that you did so well with your other OCs that I was expecting something that would stand out a bit more. His backstory is pretty cool, what with him being adept in poison and all, (it suits him because of his greed slashed coat.)

 

 

6/10-

 

 

Sister Dirge

Oh my god... She's so HHNNNNNGGGGG.

Yes she's adorable, I'll give you that, Midnight. But I think that I can still review her seroisl- OH GOD THOS GLASSES!!

Too cute. I can't do this.

 

8/10-

 

There you go. I need to take a brake, my head hurts from fighting with the MLPforums word processor.

Edited May 10, 2013 by Scourge012

[Ruddboy Olaf 10,628]

Sorry nothing.

Edited July 22, 2024 by Ruddboy Olaf

[Adente 1,000]

Alright, I'd love a judge of my ponysona, the lazy, easygoing, the concussed, its Windy Runner! (first link in my sig) 

 

"Wait, I have to WORK?"

 

"That's cool bro..."

 

"Why do you always doubt me brain? Because your track record can't let me do anything BUT doubt you Windy! Oh, right..." ((I've made him semi-notorious for having extremely indecisive internal/mental arguments between his logical side, which he calls 'brain', and his more impulsive, dumb side, aptly referred to simply as Windy. No points for guessing which side he listens to more...)) 

 

"Will there be mares there?"

 

"Uhhhh... Sorry, I wasn't listening..."

 

Be as cruel in your criticisms of Windy as you wish, my good friend!

 

"...but not too harsh, ok...? I'm a sensitive soul..." 

 

What are you talking about, you're as sensitive as a battering ram, Windy!

 

"Wah! You don't know me or my story!"

 

Of course I do, I CREATED you. And I didn't create you to be an angsty whiny  OP OC, so cut it out!

[Midnight Seeker 302]

I literally had an over 2500 character long review nearly finished for you, but my computer refreshed the page and I lost everything. Autosave, my ass.

 

Midnight Seeker

I like his design, the horns look cool, and his dark coat matches his brown mane and tail well. His personality would serve the hero of a story well, and his backstory is cool and fresh.

 

8/10-

 

 

Sunset Dreamer

A little hard to look at because of the way her mane's colors clash, but the wings and reptile eyes, along with the horns give her a cool evil look. Her backstory is cool, the way you explained that her anger is a mask was a nice touch, but I feel as if her conflict with Seeker was resolved too easily, I kinda would have liked to have a seem some conflict. (I just like drama and battles.)

 

7/10-

 

 

 

 

 

 

Vortex

Wow. I actually quite like this one. The strange design on his coat reflects his insanity well, as do his out of control mane and tail. The boots and armbands look crazy as well. The fact that he doesn't have a past makes him seem a little rushed, but I liked to ways you went into detail about his madness.

 

 

8/10- 

 

 

 

Mother Eldrich

I really like this one. Her design is nice, she looks quite powerful, like she should be in charge. The fact that she made her wings for herself kind of Gives her more depth than most alicorn OCs. Her colors all look nice together, so everything checks out okay design-wise. Her personality is believable. If she was used in a fanfic, she'd feel like a real person, I know it.

 

 

9/10-(Didn't think I'd be giving many of these out in this thread. )

 

 

Count Toxin

This is probably my least favourite one, mostly because if his design. It's not that I don't like him, because I do. Its mostly that you did so well with your other OCs that I was expecting something that would stand out a bit more. His backstory is pretty cool, what with him being adept in poison and all, (it suits him because of his greed slashed coat.)

 

 

6/10-

 

 

Sister Dirge

Oh my god... She's so HHNNNNNGGGGG.

Yes she's adorable, I'll give you that, Midnight. But I think that I can still review her seroisl- OH GOD THOS GLASSES!!

Too cute. I can't do this.

 

8/10-

 

There you go. I need to take a brake, my head hurts from fighting with the MLPforums word processor.

You make me blush sir. I really do love these my little family and have been planning the fanfic for quite a while. Just so you know, Vortex does indeed have a back story. I am keeping it to myself until the time is right for it to be revealed. Here is a little hint. Your use of the Joker was very adapt.

 

I agree with you on The Count's design. I love the character, but I was frustrated to hell finding his look. I see him as being a noble, but with no desire to impress anyone with his appearance. He is meant to be both refined and practical (and finding the balance was tough!)

 

Thank you so very much for your kind words and honest judgement.

 

Bugger about the computer messing with you. I swear they do that on purpose.

[deadprofile 1,122]

My OC is the ponified "me." I have a post in the RP character list about Treble Bolt.  Just click on my sig. if you want information on her.  I also want my husband's OC judged.  Metal Earth is him ponified as well, so neither backstory is quite made-up...

here is a pic of both of them from my tumblr header...

.